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pnkrockgrl 2007-05-18 . chapter 20
omg god jay allways telling pepole to run away not good but hes doing it 4 a good reson n e way its so good i love it
pnkrockgrl 2007-05-18 . chapter 19
wow still love it i think sean and whatever that girls name is should date
pnkrockgrl 2007-05-18 . chapter 18
yay jays back but OMG sean wow i didnt see that comein at all i love sean and jay omg ah i love this omg omg ok am done
pnkrockgrl 2007-05-18 . chapter 17
man i guess i should stop missing jay cuz i dont think hes comein back man.. ha ha babys mess up ur sex life lol
pnkrockgrl 2007-05-18 . chapter 16
i still miss jay ... and i still love this story
pnkrockgrl 2007-05-18 . chapter 15
i miss jay...i just whated u to know that ur doing a really good job its so good
pnkrockgrl 2007-05-18 . chapter 14
aww no bring my jay back bring him back right now
pnkrockgrl 2007-05-18 . chapter 13
i knew it i knew it well kinda it was my 2ed guess iam so tho i whis it was jays baby o well
pnkrockgrl 2007-05-18 . chapter 12
so i still think its craig well going to reed more
pnkrockgrl 2007-05-18 . chapter 11
wow awsome i love this part it was cute he lones her aw ok so iam thinking craigs the dad now
pnkrockgrl 2007-05-18 . chapter 10
aww jays not the dad and so now i think its craigs baby and damnit emma snap out of it and fall in love with jay plez thank u
pnkrockgrl 2007-05-17 . chapter 9
yay i was right about the oliver thing yay go me go me i am in love with this story i have to reed the rest later tho
pnkrockgrl 2007-05-17 . chapter 8
so i still think jays the dad and i think that emmas new friend is dateing oliver but i guess we will see
pnkrockgrl 2007-05-17 . chapter 7
good job i like it
pnkrockgrl 2007-05-17 . chapter 6
aw i like jay with the baby so cute i still think jays the dad n e ways love it going to reed more
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