Beautiful job. This is a very special piece of writing. I've loved how you developed their relationship, and your Sephiroth is awesome.

what happened to updating? it's been 3 years! please update!

damn, that's some pent up tension.

eh? you leave me speechless again. -.-

Finally! I understood the last part. LOL.

eeww on the mummies.

I have no words right now. your writing style is original, i think. bravo on this chap.

hmm, Cloud would fight his way out of the hospital.

i'm confused. but then again, i'm not. i think this fanfic is so original.

o.o poor areis.

o.o oh wow.

-whistles- wow. nice good.

nice start.

This story... is wow! Maybe the best Aeriseph ever! And definitely it has the coolest way of revivng her.

I hope you didn't abandon it for good. That would certainly be a shame!

Anyway, I hope this review helps with the inspiration.

It's getting more intense and interesting. You're a very good writer... I'm so jealous. You are, by far, the best Aeriseph fanfic writer out there. I hope this simple review (encouragement) would inspire you to write.