|Reviews for Still Fire|
| sapphireswimming 8/7/12 . chapter 1
This is so beautiful. All of the phrases you chose were perfect.
And the bit with Roy hating the rain. I sat here and reread it about five times. Those lines hit home in a way that a description about Roy has never done for me before. Bravo.
| LittleAlchemist 10/4/11 . chapter 1
Wonderful written, really...!
In the end a little hasty, but I still love your writing style...! Just wonderful...! .
| N.C. Stormeye 5/20/08 . chapter 1
Beautifully fluid and lyrical. It starts out choppy, but one gets used to it.
| izzypie 4/16/07 . chapter 1
excellent. I really loved how the narrative was written with the beautiful description.
Lovely, well done.
| The Tiramisu Of Impending Doom 4/11/06 . chapter 1
So far this is my favorite Roy and Riza fic you wrote, but I still haven't finished reading your stuff, so maybe I'll find more. Heheheh. Really beautiful and in character. It makes me happy that she warms him at the end.
| Lady of the Void 3/19/06 . chapter 1
That was so beautiful. I love how you used their names to illustrate emotional pain and the intensity of the scene.
| rainismysunshine 12/23/05 . chapter 1
| kimmy TurCha 12/19/05 . chapter 1
I liked very nice, alot of meaning for me to define and say in the review b/c i have to run but i really did enjoy it alot great write
| Nando the RPS King 11/6/05 . chapter 1
Excellent work, beautifully written.
| MoonStarDutchess 9/30/05 . chapter 1
| sakura 9/19/05 . chapter 1
that was really good. i hope that you write more of this couple, cause it was really deep. youre a good writer! keep it up! :)
| VFPC 9/19/05 . chapter 1
Aw that was sweet