This is so beautiful. All of the phrases you chose were perfect.

And the bit with Roy hating the rain. I sat here and reread it about five times. Those lines hit home in a way that a description about Roy has never done for me before. Bravo.

Wonderful written, really...!

In the end a little hasty, but I still love your writing style...! Just wonderful...! .

Beautifully fluid and lyrical. It starts out choppy, but one gets used to it.

excellent. I really loved how the narrative was written with the beautiful description.

Lovely, well done.

So far this is my favorite Roy and Riza fic you wrote, but I still haven't finished reading your stuff, so maybe I'll find more. Heheheh. Really beautiful and in character. It makes me happy that she warms him at the end.

That was so beautiful. I love how you used their names to illustrate emotional pain and the intensity of the scene.

aw!

Rayne

I liked very nice, alot of meaning for me to define and say in the review b/c i have to run but i really did enjoy it alot great write

Excellent work, beautifully written.

Very good!

that was really good. i hope that you write more of this couple, cause it was really deep. youre a good writer! keep it up! :)

Aw that was sweet