 Alaena Night 2007-01-12 . chapter 1Aww! This was good. I know you may not get this review, since this story was written a while ago, and since the alert systems here seem to be working rather lazily, but I just wanted to say that you did a good job with this! I think "Kreznick" should officially be Crusnik or Krusnik, but I've seen it spelled so many different ways, it doesn't make much difference. I like how you wrote each character's reaction to Lilith leaving.
Keep up the good work!
-Alaena |