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JastaElf
2008-04-21 . chapter 1
Just effing brilliant. It is very hard to come up with enough spectacular words to describe how gorgeous this is. I will never, flat NEVER, look at Go Fish ever again in the same way...

The characterizations are brilliant... I love the concept that Rufus has a Relationship with all of the Turks--and the idea of Kadaj trying to seduce Rufus to Mother like this is just... OMG, so unbelievably HOT...

You use words beautifully, brilliantly. Thank you so much for sharing this with us all!
ladydoradee
2007-05-21 . chapter 1
I ate and breathed in this story...lovely...want to take Rufus away and make him forget. Maybe Vincent can help...
Jen
2006-07-28 . chapter 1
*Claps* Wonderful work, a bit eerie as well. The lack of quotation marks add to a sort of apathy for words.
yamisukui
2006-04-03 . chapter 1
...Would it freak you out if I asked you too marry me? I love this fic! I die everytime I read it.
Duchess Nire
2006-02-09 . chapter 1
... this is beyond amazing. I'm surprised that it only has thirteen reviews minus my own. I kept forgetting to breathe as I read this. Your description of the Seikon's progression is gripping, and how you portray the interaction of Rufus and his Turks is simply stunning. I'm not sure if I even have a favorite part, but if there was one, it would have to be the whole Kadaj section.

'Veni, veni, venias.'

That gave me chills, and I rarely get chills like that when I'm reading something. A haunting echo of Sephiroth... speaking of which, you make Kadaj as creepy as I believe him to be. I think we only got glimpses of just how much madness there is in him. His obsession with his 'Mother' is one of his more disturbing qualities, especially towards the climax of his little encounter with Rufus.

I loved the relationship you created between our dear young Shinra and Sephiroth. I will never be able to play another game of Go Fish without turning into a giggly fangirl, probably.

Lastly,

'Do I look like Captain Highwind?

Only from the back, sir.'

I'm not sure what makes that so incredibly hilarious, but I laughed so hard that I had tears. It was wonderful~

You truly have a way with words. This story gets my highest praises, and will become my own personal canon.

~Nire
bitter green tea
2006-01-07 . chapter 1
Wow. That was beautiful. I love how you added so much depth to Rufus' personality. I also love the narration of the fic and the part where Rufus asked if Kadaj knew how to play Go Fish, that was priceless. Thanks for the good read.
Kamichiee
2005-11-19 . chapter 1
This is extremely well written.
Abraxas-Nor
2005-11-09 . chapter 1
Very well written, incredibly tasteful. I tip my hat to you. The style is nice and it just works. Not many people can pull it off, but you did.
Rosalyn Angel
2005-11-06 . chapter 1
Yes! I found this story again! I had read it, gushed SO MUCH, but I was on campus so I couldn't review, and life got hectic and I just forgot... but here it is! So I am reviewing!

This is so beautifully haunting. The entire -aura- of the story is wonderful. The flow, the manner of words--I really, really enjoyed it.

The Kadaj/Rufus certainly didn't hurt either.

I have to disagree with another reviewer... I think having no quotations marks added to the story. A sort of eerie detachment...

I loved how you gave glances into Sephiroth, too, and related him to Kadaj, and the stuff about mothers... The only thing that made me a little uneasy is the Turks thing, where he lied with all of them... I suppose it gives them a certain closeness, and sadness when they couldn't touch him anymore, and a reason to let Kadaj do so--but it just seemed a little odd to me. Maybe I'm just a wuss...

I really hope you write more for Rufus! ^_^ You portrayed him so well.

Adding to favs.

-RA, out
SakuraBubbles the Muffin Child
2005-10-24 . chapter 1
This is the second time I'm reading this story and I'll let you know that the first was what made me break down from my 'I'm-gonna-wait-until-it's-out-on-DVD' mode and get FF7AC immediately. I so thank you for that. This fic is amazing, and hell, I'm a huge Rufus fan. I need to do a fic like this, one that gives him the recognition he deserves. Thanks for taking the time to write this. ::bows and runs away::
leea_silver
2005-10-13 . chapter 1
Vey good, I like your style. You use descriptions that I've never heard of before, it's a style I've never seen, at least not on the net. Very good.. though it was kind of strange when Kadaj raped Rufus..
10000PoisonedKisses
2005-10-02 . chapter 1
I really like how you ended this chapter. Very creative. Are you going to post more?
Orin Drake
2005-09-26 . chapter 1
Sort of a haunting quality to it... I enjoyed it.
Amona
2005-09-24 . chapter 1
I was looking for a good Rufus fic and am happy to have found this one. Was a great read!
Rufus Fan!
2005-09-20 . chapter 1
Whoa. Whoa! Whoa. Whoa. Whoa. That was some crazy, deep stuff going on. Whoa. I'm sitting here, wondering what just happened after finising your fic. XD Final Fantas-tic!
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