 Gaminguy 2009-11-11 . chapter 1Oh. God. post. part. two.
This is an awesome concept and I really enjoyed part one. |
 Zenoen-the-mac-user 2009-11-10 . chapter 1please continue this story and finnish it i loved it and really would like to see it completed |
 Mike 5 tone 2009-09-12 . chapter 1 I have to give credit where its due, you've written a damn good fic. The characters are VERY well written, with enough of the characteristics we've come to know so well, and added an additional parameter with the transition of Kasumi. Seeing how she reacts with the others is highly amusing. Nabiki's inference to her being an appliance does fall under the typical not human stereotype, but it fits SO WELL with the mercenary character who deeply loves her family. Seeing the two parts balance out is incredibally interesting. I really hope you pick this fic back up soon, its definatly worth continuing! |
 Crimson Crypt 2009-08-29 . chapter 1hurry with with part 2! im going insane! |
 Jimm 2009-08-11 . chapter 1Wow, it's been a long time since I've found a Ranma fic that truly surprised me. Thanks for sharing it with us. |
 TharzZzDunN 2009-08-03 . chapter 1Incredible and original development of characters, I am very impressed with your work. Please write more if you enjoy doing so! |
 zzxxphaser 2009-05-18 . chapter 1when is the second part going to be posted? |
 Megatyrant 2009-04-11 . chapter 1Gah, don't leave us hanging like that. We need an update here, ASAP. :P
Megatyrant out. |
 Dragon Dagger 2009-03-31 . chapter 1so where'e part two? I've been looking forward to it for some time now. (i.e. YEARS) Love the premises of the story. Keep writing.
DD |
 Morden Night 2009-03-23 . chapter 1 Is that it? I want to read more. This is different. I like it. |
 Ian 2009-03-14 . chapter 1 Damn good story! |
 moritynz 2009-03-08 . chapter 1Ok that was awesome. I hope there really is a second part to come |
 Golden Arms 2009-03-02 . chapter 1So, how's the next chapter looking? :D |
 Riniko22 2009-02-24 . chapter 1 This was an interesting break from the usual Ranma stories that I read. Would like to see the second half when you are ready. |
 FW 2008-12-08 . chapter 1 That was a really entertaining story. Thanks so much for writing it. I like how you wrote Ranma's interactions with Kasumi after he found out about that revelation as I could sort of see him acting that way.
The couple plot holes I see are how is she maintained and where are the spare parts and such? I mean she seems to be a fixture in the house...So I'm not sure when the maintainence and such would be completed. Also why would this mystery company give them cart blanche use for this obviously super advanced android. I mean if such technology existed after only a couple years testing with the family I think they would want to market it in some fashion...
Still regardless of those few quirks it was a very enjoyable story. Really would love to know how she grows more and more into her unpredictable role...as I assume Ranma's interaction will begin to make her more and more human...Very very interesting all in all. Thanks for the story :). |