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| Darth KenObi-Wan 2008-04-07 ch 12,  | abuse*Gasps* They killed the kittens! HEHE! lol. |
| Sexy Scottish Accent 2008-04-01 ch 11, | abuseThis was very interesting...I liked it very much! LOL, I write sometimes when shouldn't be either... |
| sweetchica55 2008-04-01 ch 11, | abusecool chapter!! |
| Kyle the Crazy American 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abusePhenomenal action scene, and good job capturing the emotions and passions of battle. A few small grammatical errors, but nothing grave enough to take away from the overall effect. |
| sweetchica55 2008-03-23 ch 10, | abusethis is a very good chapter and a very good story,. keep writing I really like it. You are on my favs list... |
| Darth Indurate 2007-11-05 ch 9, | abuseI see Maul is one of your favorite characters too. Great job with the characterization of one of the Star Wars universe's most awesome assassins. Long Live Darth Maul. Ops, I guess TPM is almost ten years old now, and I'm a little too late for that. Thanks for giving Maul breath again. |
| Radarck 2007-08-24 ch 6, | abuseVery nice, I especially like chapter 6. I think in chapter 4 it should read "single-handedly" instead of "single handily", but other than that I can't fault any of it. |
| aximilli452 2005-11-19 ch 3, | abuseNow that's how star wars should feel. If you have any pointers on how to make my story feel like that, let me know. Except for a few typos it was great. |
| Jedi Master Eisley Oricla 2005-10-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseCy it's wonderful as always!! I liked how you gave some background to the hunters, it made me care. But not really lol :p |