I like it! It's kinde sweet

WHY are the best fics (and I mean that) the ones with the least reviews? The bad ones are the ones with lots...hmm, I guess quality, not quantity, right?
THIS IS WONDERFUL. You are a truly talented writer, and as such I'm going to request that you read some of my work (if you have time)...great job, all your characters are as in-character as I've ever seen, and your use of words...wonderful. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. Please keep writing, and I hope I'll hear from you soon!
~Ivy~

I think this is rather cute. I especially liked the flashback to their not-quite-first-date.

I know I'm a bit late for updating, but you really are an amazing writer. I thought this story was brilliant and I can't wait to see what else you can come up with.

*RoseAtBay*

This is one of the best L/J fics I've ever read. Ever.

=D

actually i really really really like it its really ...great
!!really i love it could you make moe stories like this?!?!

Wow! That was a wonderful chapter! I don't usually like stories that don't start without James being miserable and Lily unaware, but this was very good. The Personifications were very creatively and vividly portrayed. And Lily was more like I imagine her to be.
Thumbs up!
Joanna
P.S. I would really enjoy hearing from you. How old are you?

Hey! I found this on someone's favourite's list and had to check it out...great job! I really like how you portrayed Sirius in the fic...anyway, I really enjoyed, you're very talented. Keep writing!

That really nice! huhuhu... so cute...

Brilliant. I love how casual your story is. Nothing is overdone; everything is simple. Oh, and Sirius, Sirius is in character. Your Sirius is perfect. Your Lily and James are perfect. The whole thing is, oh, just absolutely perfect. Oh, and I sound like a gushing fan girl. ::shudders:: Good fic. No, great fic! I can't wait for the next story you put up!!

great!!

Great story, you really know how to put things so they sound just right. ; D

I cannot believe this has not gotten reviews yet! I feel privileged to be your first reviewer! I really loved this. The whole story was told in such a smooth way, and you managed to pull off the description of both people's feelings very well. It definitely wasn't too fluffy, but it was sweet and more realistic. I liked Sirius, but I would have liked to see more of the Marauders.

My favorite line is definitely: "Only a truly twisted society had a heart pierced with an arrow as its sign of love." How very true.

"What did a bloke need with a heart, anyway? Useless things, really. Dreadfully hard to keep up with, and always causing trouble." That one was great, too. What a depressed guy, though. Haha...Your lines were deep, in a sense. I loved it. Loved it, loved it, loved it.

Yay for Favorites additions!

aw! that's so fluffy! Who cares if it's out of season?! It was great!