Wonderful. I really like poems.
I wish I got to write poetry in english class. *pouts*
Very descriptive.
Splendid.

Whee! Roy/Riza! I love that pairing. ^^ This was a beautiful poem, and I love it because it's so interesting that upon seeing flame, a person would think about its beauty rather than its destructive power. Good poem! =)

-Alaena Night

wow! great poem.. very well written for a poem.. love it.. you did a great job! keep it up! yes, it's slightly royai but when ur an avid royai fan (like me) you'll think of this as a direct to the point royai story/poem.. eheh.. great job! keep it up! ja!

Erinn~

YO!(yeah it's me)
Nice. I enjoyed it. It was sure was one of a kind. These Royai Ishbal stuff is a great mix!

FLAMETAL-_-

heyy- its farah. aww! this is so cute! i love it. great job! =)

For your English class? Wow. And you posted it on the site. But, how does it fit into the Fullmetal story line? Anyway, I loved it.

im thinking...'how pretty'...but sadly, i dont have a rifle with me...=)

nice!

That was excellent! Great job!

hey! finally reviewed! lolol... i love this poem... its so pretty! :0) roy/riza always! :0)

i still dont get wut this poem has to do with FMA hahaha

Wow... It's so detailed.
Nya, d(^^)b good job!

~SK

OK THAT WAS DEFINITALLY NOTICIBLE ROY AND RIZA AND THE ISHBAL WAR. (just lettin ya know) and...AWSOME! love that. added to favorites

Wow. That was awesome.