cool story! I can't wait to read the rest! Keep up the awesome work!

:O)

This is an awesome story! Keep the chapters coming! DH!

I lobed it, it was five times better than I thought it would be and it was just a great read. Dilandau ROCKS in this, and you portray uhhhhhh him great. I am just DYING to read more, write now, write faster.

good job, yet again! I'm rather interested with this Dilandau/Hitomi thing... keep it up, I can't wait to read more!

COOOL! This is such a neat story*smile*.I love it.

The first part was kinda scary though.

PLEASE FINISH IT PLEASE FINISH IT PLEASE FINISH IT!

Not to be cruel, but this reads more like a summary than a story. You need to add more detail.

This wasn't romantic at all :p But it was a good chapter... confusing, but good. Can't wait to read more!

This is a very interesting fic. Please continue with the next part!

Could you please write more chapters soon? This sounds like a really good beginning, but I'm so sick of reading good fics and then having to wait for ages for the next chapters - could you please, please write more soon? A little Hitomi/Dilandau, perhaps? Hm?

WOO HOO! HE'S DEAD, HE'S DEAD! Go Dilandausama! *does a little happy dance* RIght.. anyway, this is good, as always... I love it already, and all you had to do was kill Dilandau... I'm too easy to please, huh? Can't wait to read more!