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| Maurean 2006-08-18 ch 1,  | abuseHey,I loved your story.I'm looking forward to the next chapter!It better be a long,long chapter (Worth the wait). well,good luck updating the next chapter.(Soon) NOTE: You better not abandon this story or else... |
| YumeTakato 2005-10-31 ch 2, | abuseXD I look forward to your next update with earnest... yess... Kaito being.. abnormally angsty and mysterious bwahaha |
| Fyliwion 2005-10-31 ch 2, | abuseAwesome! You updated!! Really great chappy... Teh writing was awesomen... My only critique was that the long paragrpahs were a bit hard to read with the dialogue... it might work better if you spaced it out when they were talking... it might make it appear longer but easeir to read... other then that though great chappy ^^ I love the mop bit that was great ^^ |
| Imaginator 2005-09-25 ch 1, | abuseLol, this is pretty col. You've created a unique setting and an interesting plotline. I, for one, would definitely like to see where you take this story too. Ganbatte! |
| KumoriKage 2005-09-22 ch 1, | abuseSo that's your view as to why he takes an interest in Ayumi? And frankly banpaia would probably only be in use in modern Japan. I think that they would be more likely to use their own word kyuuketsuki rather than an adaptation of the English word. |
| YumeTakato 2005-09-21 ch 1, | abuseVery *very* interesting story! Please update sometime soon!! =3 |
| Fyliwion 2005-09-20 ch 1, | abuseTHATS AWESEOME!! *yelps in joy* I actually let out a loud exclaimation in the middle of our theatre office at school and started squeaking... got quite a few looks ^^ (an actual LONG AU new Kaito story ^^ You realy made my day (after 4 separate AP tests... yup ^^)) And I'm very happy I read it ^^ Its aweseome! I love the take on the vampire... starting him off centuries back and having him watch over the generations of the charrie ^^ The story and writings just wonderful ^^ I'll be eagerly awaiting your next chappy ^^ |