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Silver Warrior 11/21/05 . chapter 5
whoo! I’m very happy for Wanda. Everything in her life, save being a mutant, is shaping up into being that of a normal teenager. Kind, supportive family, nice, sweet boyfriend, and good friends.
GothikStrawberry 11/5/05 . chapter 5
A nice ending for a nice story! Well done! :)
Episodic 11/4/05 . chapter 5
Ah, all nice and fluffy and warm. I like your endings. The name Denise Dane strikes me as very comic booky. Which I guess is very fitting. Well Lorna and Wanda's sisterly relationship seems very together and firm. Sisters are funny. I know a set of twins that if I bring up the day the showed up in matching outfits (they hate looking alike) or the 'she stole my hair brush' incident, they pick up the argument right where they left off. It's hilarious, but I really shouldn't bring those up. Anyway, I'm anxiously awaiting the next in the AGU series...and whatever it is I decide to write. At the moment it's looking very autobiographical. I have plenty of ideas but I keep getting stuck on how to introduce it all. That and I can't stop listening to the Moulin Rouge soundtrack. So getting to the point. Good stuff and update soon
DemonRogue 11/4/05 . chapter 5
That was a great ending
Red Witch 11/3/05 . chapter 5
Wow! Great fic! I love it! Great job!
trecebo 11/3/05 . chapter 5
Nicely done. You told the story well, creating layers of emotion, not just plunging in to the sweetness that kills... Taking the pieces, you crafted a story that built slowly over the weekend and allowed Wanda to grow at her own pace. I think you did a great job overall.
Ruby631 11/3/05 . chapter 5
Aw, what a sweet ending...I like how Denise likes Wanda...I think that if she ever really started anything real with Magneto, she would not have let him send her to the asylum.
X00001 11/3/05 . chapter 5
great chapter does it mean that your going to carry on with your AGU series now that this story is over hope so keep up the good work
Sean Malloy-1 11/2/05 . chapter 5
Great work. I can't wait for your next full-length AGU story, especially if it is as sood as your other AGU fics
KaliAnn 11/2/05 . chapter 5
Well that was an intresting tale of how Denise and Erik met. I found that seeing how people can change and that no matter what Wanda has family to come home to. Well that was a short but sweet story.
howlerdrode 11/2/05 . chapter 5
Very heartwarming chapter. It appears that Wanda is going to find the family she has missed after all. I really liked this story. I hope to see more llike this one. It was very good.
slickboy444 11/2/05 . chapter 5
Nice ending man! Very nice ending! Loved the flashback scene with Magneto! Although it really does make you wonder, what turned him into the madman he is now? It's clear that he had a real heart at once, one that really could have done some good to the world. But where did it go? What happened to change all that? It leaves you really thinking in the end and if any story can do that, then I can safely say that it's a damn good story! And that end part where Denise embraces Wanda into her family was so sweet! It was definitely worth the wait for this fic and it made me smile in the end! This was a nice little interlude in the AGU world and I thoroghly enjoyed reading it! Great job my friend! You always know how to leave your mark! Keep up the great work as always dude! Stay cool like you always do! Slickboy out.
ViciousAssassin 11/2/05 . chapter 5
*sniffs* I shall not cry... beautiful ending. Really enjoyed Denises story at the beginning, it really did show a different side of Wanda's father... course now I have to wonder if that side could ever be seen again. Nice of Lorna to give her little sister a present/memory of her time with the Danes. Really liked Denises comment to Wanda that she always be a part of the Dane family. Nice ending.

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ViciousAssassin 11/2/05 . chapter 4
Didnt even realize I missed this chapter, sorry about that. Lovely chapter though, really enjoyed the fight scene (semi-fight) at the mall and how when the security guards came Lorna just showed them her SHIELD ID... *laughing* sucks for those FOH members, then again it'll teach them a lesson for messing with others because of there differences. That dream of Wandas at the beginning was good, she should really be careful now since she talks in her sleep, course cant even begin to imagine what Rogue would do if it happened.

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Quillian 11/2/05 . chapter 5
This was a fantastic ending to a magnficent fic. :) Can't say much more than that.
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