Strange. Simple, to the point, not to descriptive which isn't all as annoying as I imagined it would be, its was actually relativly, despite that fact that its juts a bit drab, not much- refreshing. Like a cold glass of water.

This is the first ever GB fic I've ever read here, figured I'd give you the syber trohpy Baby.
Interesting theory to, i can totally see Janine ending up that way- they where right to pare her with Tully in the films, as much as I wanted it to, Janine and Egon probably would have never worked out.

You entertained me. (:

I'll be frank. The premise itself is interesting (alternate worlds and what not, it can be fun to say, what if Micheal Draverhaven never went mad, or Ray was more grown up, or as one person suggested, the company was set up in the 1930s then it's interesting and amusing to see the alternate views).

A problem though... I'm sorry to say is with the Clara business. The 'alternate' Egon suggests that Janine might 'become controlling' despite the fact it's an alternate universe. The story might not seem so... so (for the lack of a better term, Mary Sue like) if it were mentioned that "While I cannot be certain, but she might become controlling) because it's always possible that in the 'first universe', Janine turns out to be normal. After all, in an alternate universe, Clare could becom controlling.

Keep in mind, whatever might happen to an established character in our universe can also happen to a fan created one in an alternate universe. ;)

Otherwise, an interesting story.