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The Fluffy Muffin Queen
2008-07-17
ch 1,
abuse-wrinkles nose- You may've wanted them to have a happy ending, but I don't want them to have a happy ending at all. I'm a Kikyo-hater, through and through. -dives out of the way of large bulldozer- Dear lord... -.-;

Anyways, I wanted to tell you that this fic is really good. I kept on swaying between who InuYasha was living his life with, Kagome or Kikyo. But when it said that Miroku, Shippo, and Sango were her family, I thought that it was Kagome, and then it said Lady Kikyo... MWARG! -bangs head on table-

I'm rambling... I need to stop that... ><

I liked how, in the end, Kikyo no longer hated anybody, even Kagome. You're writing's good, and I liked Kikyo in here (for a space of 5 seconds, but hey, that's a record for me, so you should be very VERY proud! -dives out of another bulldozer- I have the feeling you're not going to be happy with me or this review... Oh dear...) and you should continue writing.

~The Fluffy Muffin Queen (obey my fluffy goodness/golden-brown authority!)
Silence-Darkness
2008-03-17
ch 1,
abuse... Well, I went to read through some of your reviews for this piece of fiction first, and then considered your notes on a "happy ending" for the two.

Because I first thought that it was Kikyo that made the wish, and then when you called her lady Kikyo that her wish was to possess Kagome's living flesh...

... and given that Inuyasha was hiding a lot from the Kikyo now, that he was trying to hide that little bit of ugliness.

But still, Kagome making the wish makes a little more sense, I suppose. Still makes me wonder what you were talking about Kikyo finding the new clothes too restrictive; never wore a kimono (not japanese, not female), but I wouldn't imagine it's that much more restrictive to the traditional priest robes.

Good story though. Flowing narrative, perhaps your emphasis on her jealousy or whatever could have been made a bit subtler, but overall a good fifteen minutes.

Cheers.
sweet-ghyny13
2007-11-27
ch 1,
abuseThat is one compelling twist.
I was honestly expecting it to be Kagome... since you said that she didn't have any miko powers... You know, Kagome was seldom described as a powerful miko in the manga or anime, especially when the comparison is drawn between her and Kikyo.
I almost cried when I found out that Kagome made the wish... Does that mean she died? Cuz I didn't really catch any part where it says that she's still alive somewhere.
Omg, I can only say that it's an incredible story, because of the twist and the realistic portrayal of Inuyasha and Kikyo as adults.
Good job!
Langus
2006-11-04
ch 1,
abuseI really loved the twist you threw in at the end there. I wasn't expecting it at all. Nice work :) I normally hate Kikyo in any story but this one was original enough to be good.
ErrorDexis
2006-09-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseI enjoyed this alot. Trying to discover who the chracters were with each detail made me want to read furthur. It's very well versed. Nicely done.
KeiChanz
2006-08-30
ch 1,
abuseDamn...as I was reading this, I really was thinking that it was Kagome who was Inuyasha's wifey. Great job, had me tricked. =]

Keiko89
bobalina
2006-07-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseEh, it is sweet. And poor Kikkers does get a bum rap a lot. Keh. Keep writing!
Toodles,
bobalina
P.S. I got that it was Kikyo! I'm so proud of...myself...
Autumn Dragon
2006-07-25
ch 1,
abuseWait, Kikyo? I thought it was Kagome.
What about when she mentions Shippo, Sango, and Miroku? And the clothes part?
Woah, this is really confusing. O.O
I still like it though; just really confusing.
CrossoverQueen
2006-06-21
ch 1,
abuseI like this fic. It's nice to see a happy ending between Kikyo and Inuyasha.
ManonLeChat
2006-06-08
ch 1,
abuseI loved this. Beautiful realism. Both Inuyasha and Kikyou come across as in-character adult versions of the current manga-selves. I was guessing till the end whether the voice speaking was Kikyou or Kagome. Wonderfully written!
Tasinda
2006-04-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow, this is great!! I am really happy to see a fic that explains Kikyo's persepective, but you had me constantly changing my guess as to who is was right up until the end! Good job!
notcrazyjustdisturbed
2005-12-05
ch 1,
abusewait, she got called kikyo. so is it kikyo or kagome? or was the point that it didnt matter who it was?
Qem
2005-11-25
ch 1,
abuseHee. I was suspicious when the name was omitted, but I loved how a happy ending for the two came about. =D
Iku
2005-11-16
ch 1,
abuseHmm, the twist was a bit a of shock and it was nice to see Kikyo with a happy ending.
Leira ^.~
2005-10-10
ch 1, anon.
abusethis was very good. witch is kind of hard to say b/c i really don't like Kikyo. but i do like this and your right it is nice to have them in a happy ending every now and then.
Leira ^.~
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