ok I don't think it's fair that you keep leaving these cliffhangers!! please find time to do another chapter soon!! I can't wait to see how everyone will react to Lema being there now

Wow this really has changed a lot, they're off the planet already. But I still love it. It's exciting. There's so much going on with the characters, the story seems fuller. I can't wait to see how Kakarot turns out now with Cyan raising him and seeing he's the strongest ancient. Keep up the great work! I can wait for the next update!

I just have to tell you that this has been a very delightful story. Full of romance, suspense, action, horror, and other things that i cant think of. You have done a very good job on this story like you have done with your other stories.

This has to be one of the best chapters i have read in this story yet! Keep up the excellent work!

This story is awesome! I absoloutly LOVE it! Keep it up. One question... Do you think there is any way you could add me as a part in the story? You dont have to if you dont want to. Please email if you decide to.

Thanks,
James

AWESOME!

Very excellent chapter. suspense, action I am loving this story more and more with each chapter that i read.

This is really good. I can tell that you have put a lot of thought into this story and I think it will be one of the best yet.

Now this is starting to get really good. I cant wait to read on how she does in the trials.

This story is starting to get a bit interesting. Keep up the good work.

not bad for the begnning. Its been a while since I read any of your stories so I am happy to be able to read this one. I hope that this story does as well as your others.