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Rayven Storme
2009-07-07 . chapter 3
This was absolutely hysterical! The best funny Teen Titans story I have ever read.
Carlint
2009-07-03 . chapter 3
You sure have a way with keeping this show in character! This chapter was so funny! Although, I almost expected Slade to just scream at them, something like, "I can't take this anymore! Take him! Just take him back!" XD
Carlint
2009-07-03 . chapter 2
Lol! This is so funny! I love it! It's funny to imagine Silkie biting him...lol & him screaming. XD
kazumigirl
2008-11-17 . chapter 1
This story was so hilarious! My favorite part is: Gah!” Silkie was demanding to be let go. It wanted to get back to Starfire now, please.

“Quiet, apprentice,” Slade told at the worm. “I am ranting at the moment.”

“Gah!” Silkie repeated.

“I said silence!” Furious, Slade spun around and backhanded Silkie with the side of his hand.

Silkie was stunned. The silkworm had never been struck before. Watery tears welled up in its eyes, and Silkie began to cry loudly.

“Oh dear—” Slade regretted his action immediately. “Please don’t cry, my apprentice. You’ll make me cry!”

Silkie, however, could not be quieted, and it continued to wail. Slade wrung his hands, then on a whim unstrapped the worm’s bonds. He picked up Silkie and held the mutant against his chest, patting its back in an attempt to calm it down. “There, there, apprentice, everything’s all right—”

Taking advantage of its newfound freedom, Silkie stopped crying immediately, and dove for Slade’s neck, teeth bared. “GRAW!”

That was too funny! Keep it up!
Michelle
2008-06-18 . chapter 3
Ok I'm one of those know-it-alls,that are always telling people if they are doing something wrong,like picking their noses.(Why do people do that?)So this next statement is going to be a critic.Ok What the hell were you thinking?Slade is Slade.He certainly would not choose silkie as his apprentice.I thought he would choose starfire.Where has your brain been throughout the story.I think you better put it back in your head.
Anonymous(same as last time)
2008-04-02 . chapter 2
And also, Slade doesn't make clothing. That would be something Control Freak would do.
Another thing:I know you meant it as a joke, but Slade didn't get his other eye ripped out-and especially not by his former girlfriend or something. It's concealed behind the other half of his mask, which does NOT have a glowing red eye.
I don't mean to sound like a Titans worshipper, but come on.
Anonymous(same as last time)
2008-04-02 . chapter 1
For the record, Slade's not that much of a pushover.
Anonymous
2008-04-01 . chapter 3
Oh, no! Poor Robin! You should write a sequel telling what Slade does to him.
Anonymous
2008-04-01 . chapter 3
ARE. YOU. SERIOUS?! Slade took SILKIE!!?? I thought it would be Starfire! What did he expect, it's a WORM!
kazumigirl
2007-08-02 . chapter 3
This was so hilarious! It's going on my favs. list!
inq101
2007-03-27 . chapter 3
Hilarious. Everyone acting so OOC realy made this story work. I loved the wat Slade seemed to be a 'Traditional' villain, I bet that this version of him would install specialy enlarged air-vents in his lair so heroes or prisoners could crawl through them.
Chai-Tea
2006-08-23 . chapter 1
I was reading this story 'til realized it was Silkie. I enjoy your righting style but Silkie is just sort of a dumb chose, and did you know Slade had kids? I mean I read all sorts of good stories just begging for sequels. Most the time sequels would be a prefect place to bring in the Ravager, who was both his daughter Rose and his son Grant.
Slade A.K.A Death Stroke the Terminator was going on about how he needed someone who would appreciate he and I'm telling' ya Rose would be great!
Jadee
2006-08-10 . chapter 2
This is definitely going onto my favorites list! It was excellent! So much funniness! :D

You are a fabulous comedy writer. So much of this was deliciously quoteable, for example, “Terra was currently serving as her own headstone,” or “Please don’t cry, my apprentice. You’ll make me cry!”

-Sigh- I wish I had a tenth of the writing ability that you have (And drawing ability as well!). I love reading your work.

Respectfully,
Jadee.
KinHikari
2006-05-04 . chapter 3
The story was so humorous! I thought was nice to have it in Silkie's point of view... in a way.
LM22102
2006-02-01 . chapter 3
Seriously. You're good. So very good.

“Now that you won’t be returning home, I hope you do not mind if Silkie takes your room."

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