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RedDragen
2008-01-02
ch 8, anon.
abuseI am not able to read some chapters, could you send me the whole story so I could read all of it. I would like to find out what happens
Cornorama
2007-07-20
ch 11,
abuseI'm glad you did finish this, I am sorry you lost interest in AMC but I can completely see how that happened
dre123
2007-07-02
ch 11, anon.
abuselove it!! great ending!
meganrowdy
2007-06-17
ch 10,
abuseIt's a great story- please update soon!
IntotheNight
2007-04-29
ch 10,
abuseHey Dev and welcome back! I have really, really missed this story...always wondered how it would end. This chapter was a really good example of "what if?" Like, "what if...both Kendall AND Zach stopped all the dancing around and just got honest with each other, realizing what's at stake if they don't?" Recently I've been re-watching that whole heartbreaking thing in the hospital after the fire (remember that?) When neither one of them could admit how they felt? That scene still tears me to pieces. And you've approached the whole thing from a completely different angle.

I have loved this story a long time, and can't wait to see how you wrap it all up. I'm sorry you had such a hard time with it, and I hope to see more from you in the future...dialogue is generally considered very hard to write, but you have quite a talent for it!
babygirltee
2007-04-16
ch 10,
abuseALL I HAVE TO SAY IS ITS! ABOUT! FREAKING! TIME! YOU WROTE DON'T MAKE US WAIT THIS LONG FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!
Leiyla
2007-04-16
ch 10,
abuseWelcome back! I am sorry about your computer, I know how frustrating that is.
I love how Kendall had the courage and determination to go and find Zach and I am glad that Zach wasn't extremely hard headed.
I love this story I think you still have a lot to add, it might be early for an epilogue. Give us couple of chapters where Ryan gets his behind kicked in the court, and Zach and Kendall get together and adjust to becoming a family.
babygirltee
2007-01-15
ch 9,
abuseWHERE ARE YOU? I REALLY MISS YOUR WRITING!
lovetofly
2006-06-22
ch 9,
abusePlease update this story!! I'm enjoying it so much!
Liz213Mast
2006-03-22
ch 9,
abuseThis is great but I'm so mad that Ryan knows. He seemed mad in the story that he is a father now, so why does he have a lawyer ready for when Kendall wakes up, which is now.
dre10115
2006-03-22
ch 9,
abuseaww that was great! i loved it i can't wait to see what happens!!
ChicBball15
2006-03-21
ch 9,
abuseI loved it!! I was so excited when I saw the update!! Your Kendall is so true to her character! I can't wait for more! I want to know about her plan!!
tkzslover
2006-03-21
ch 9,
abuseThat dream scene was such a teaser! You are so cruel! lol. I look forward to see what Kendall's plan is. I hope we will get a happy Zendall reunion! Great update

-tkzslover
IntotheNight
2006-03-21
ch 9,
abusepoor Dev () honey, writer's block sucks. I hope you're past it now, this was a really good chapter. I just hope Kendall can get through to Zach that she needs him. Ryan and Erica are really starting to ** me off (just like on the show lol!) That was SO Erica, taking forever to get ready to go to the hospital, for chrissakes! Can't wait to read the rest of this...
Liz213Mast
2006-03-14
ch 8,
abuseHow could Zach blame himself. The only one thats to blame is that bastard Garett. Kendall better be ok or I'm gonna be pisted. Kendall and Zach deserve the best life and share it with each other. Please post soon, I can't wait to read more.
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