"Mental note: tell Jaken to be better babysitter, or will kill him. Slowly." LMAO I love inner Sesshy, he speaks like InuYasha.

Hmm. What would Sesshomaru-sama do? Punch them out and tie them to trees by their ankles is the best thing I've heard. Ever! I adore Rin. I love the father/daughter relationship she has with Sesshomaru-sama. Especially when Sesshomaru-sama sometimes has no idea how to act with her.

actually, I liked the ending alot. but my fav was when rin hung them from a tree by the ankels! I would have loved to see that!

totally awesome and well done really liked how you kept sess in character

The only thing I can see that would make a better ending, would be if Sesshomaru went and quietly enjoyed looking at the boys that Rin punched out. I'm sure they haven't woken up yet. LOL I love the visual on that myself.

I think it was awesome!

And btw i dont think Rin was out of character. I could see her doing that: asking herself 'what would Sesshomaru do?' Although i can't really see her managing to tie them to the tree. And i love the way you wrote about Sesshomaru. I can totaly see him being emotionless outside and then raging inside b/c someone was messing with Rin. Thats how all Fathers tend to be. LOL. I loved It!

that's cutee!

haha now this was totally cute

I couldn't grinning while I was reading the story XD Lol Go Rin!

go rin!

I rely liked this one

It fit quite well with the Sesshomaru we have all come to love.

I cant stop laughing! That was so great. I can so picture Rin doing that, and I love that you have Sesshomaru feeling so protective. Great Job!

clumsybookgirl13

SO CUTE

HAHAHA thats the funniest thing ive ever read XD

Aw.