Amazing story yet again.
I love your OC and your writing style.
The plot is also very gripping and I kinda like the way we haven't seen any of the GAang XD
Moving on to the next part ^^

Amazingly written. I see you, also, have not yet grasped the concept of making paragraph indentations. I have not either. XD This was actually kind of hard to read, with the stuck-together long paragraphs. But I loved the storyline, and how Kaida fits in... so yeah. Great job!

I have to say that of all the Avatar fan fics I've read so far with OCs, yours is by far my favorite. :)It's nice to know there's someone out there who likes Avatar and Yu-Gi-Oh! as much as I do. I'll probably get started on your Yu-Gi-Oh fan fic as soon as I submit this review. I hate to ask this in a review, but do you think maybe you can read and review my YGO fan fic and spread word about it to your friends if ya like it? Anyway, great fic, I hope there's more coming soon! :D

Good chapter. Update soon! i JUST WATCHED tHE SECRET OF THE FIRENATION! iT WAS SO COOL!

^_^ yay!
ack! I can't wait to see what happens to appa! :( I felt so bad for aang... anyway... back to my review!
gr... I dislike azula with a passion... I think I mentioned that before, but I still like to say it... ^_^
ah man!
don't tell me she catches her! that CAN'T be a good thing if that happens...
nice chapter... ^_^ please please! update as soon as ya can!
just wondering... is your computer letting you put the lines in? You knwo, the seperation lines? Mine isn't... so I'm just wondering if anybody else is having this problem...

Gewd chapter... can you update soon? Also I thank you for following the eppisodes, it makes it much easyier to follow.

*does happy dance* You UPDATED! YAY! Wonder chapter! but so cliffy!! please oh please update soon!

Yay! You updated! ^_^
...*reads chapter*
*sniff sniff* NO KAIDA! don't leave them!
ack! what a terrible cliffhanger you have there! :P nice chapter I really liked it! ^_^
oh, I hope she sees them fighting...and not leave... (I loved that episode, espicially when Iroh throws Azula overboard, ^_^ )
~*~silver sliver~*~

HORAY I’m SO glad you updated! This chapter was really cool! Poor Zuko that episode is kind of sad, and Azula is still a jerk

-Liz

WOW! I think that this is going to be better than #1! Update soon!

update soon!!

o, love it!

hahaha it's so cute "are you still mad at me?" i love it!

-liz

See? Didn't I tell you I was going to review this one? This story is just as good as Storm Rising. I can't wait for the next chapter. Hope your muse is helping you. (Or inspiration)

o please write more! i lurve this story! it's been long anticipated! i suppose i shouldn't talk though about long waits for updates...*hangs head in shame*

anyway, good chappie!