A: Solo now but... Over all your style is unremarkable. I was not sure if you were going for the Fairy tale style of sparse details and character development, if so you writing style should be a bit more mature such as the original tales were. Also, don't name your characters if you are going for the old style.
The beginning of your story is uninspired and nearly the same as the original. Start making changes sooner to create more interest. Alison's sudden change in demeanor at the end also did not make much sense.
If you would take any advice I would suggest that you add more details. Details will make a story come alive which yours has so far failed to do.

"Just a mother in law'. Well... creepy...

Ew! Are they going to eat the grandma or the wolf?

XD. I love this!! im in my school library and i just barely escaped getting in trouble. hahah. ok well... im done =D