This is wonderful. Love the emotions you captured. One thing, she calls him Colonel at the beginning and he was still a major.

it was cute but ya started out in season 2, for some strange reason, no matter. IT WAS CUTE!!

cute, i like it

That was excellent. I am finding myself enjoying the John/Teyla dynamic more and more and they were both perfectly in character which made your story very realistic.

I love it so beautiful

This was very cute. Poor Teyla. That episode was brutal on her. Probably the best episode for "Noble Sheppard" as well. This was a very good tag.

Neat. A nice way to explain how Teyla came to be teaching John how to fight. And Bates strikes again! (I kinda liked the guy, though...)

Ahh, I loved that episode and Bates needs every suquare inch of his ** kicked! This rocked!

I am very impressed...you description is so intense and precise that I can actually visualize the scene..This is so sweet and heartwarming...I wished something like this was in the series because it definetly explains the reason why we just love John and Teyla and why we feel that they belong together...They just do!

M, reviews with chocolat milk, tasty. Anyway, this was another great SHEYLA. Hopefully this subcategory will break three pages soon. Keep them coming.

Oh, nice. This episode always needed an added scene like this. Thanks for writing it! It reminds me how happy I am that we don't have Bates around this season.

“It is not wise to approach an Athosian from behind without announcing yourself.”

Like any sane man needs to be told that! Ha!!

Great job on a one-shot, and actually answers some questions I had about Teyla, like "did she ever consider moving to the mainland with her people?" Well, done, and perfectly in character. Please, continue to write!

Very nice, although the burgeoning feelings from him could be better explained, why he trust that instinct over reason even when he knows others question his choice. Teyla vulnerable for once was interesting and nice setup for the stick fighting. See so few episode tags for this ship.