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| Rilie Joy 2008-01-06 ch 3, | abuse*dies* oh my god, Hanson in drag again. *imagination runs wild* this is AWESOME, I don't think I've read anything else with a Booker/Hanson/Penhall triangle before. I gotta say, I absolutely LOVE IT. I know it's been forever since you last posted...but I know one reader who'd be ECSTATIC to see more...:D |
| sugarbabe 2007-12-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is great! You must write soon! XD |
| LilaGrace 2007-11-19 ch 3, anon. | abuseOMG! Why haven't I seen this earlier?! A Booker/Hanson and Hanson/Doug fic! With Hanson in drag and Booker being a nice guy! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE PLEASE! SOON! PLEASE! Luv, Lila |
| Snoopy13 2007-11-19 ch 3, anon. | abusePlease update your story! I love it! You are very talented! |
| Altean Princess of Destiny 2007-10-21 ch 3, | abuseThis is great! I'm a big fan of Hanson/Penhall! :D Please do more! |
| NikaDawson 2007-10-18 ch 3, | abuseOh, I'm so glad you updated this. It's a great fic, and the triangle starting with Booker is great. Can't wait for a new chapter. |
| GGLukeLorelai1 2007-10-16 ch 3, | abuseYou should continue. |
| gerardlover123 2007-08-20 ch 3, | abuseOmg, I love you! Please say that Booker and Hanson stay together. I dont like the Tom and Doug thing. But I think that Booker is really cute. Can't wait for an update! |
| lynny 2007-07-23 ch 3, anon. | abusewow you updated you so have to continue i thought i had reviewed this but it isnt showing that I have so yeah keep up the good work |
| Nina 2007-07-19 ch 3, anon. | abuseI'm really enjoying this so far! I'm not sure what to think about this chapter though... I like both Booker and Penhall and don't want to see anybody get hurt. I almost prefer Booker with Tom, but then where does that leave Penhall? *is confused* Loving the story though, I can't wait to see what happens~ |
| lynny 2007-07-18 ch 3, anon. | abusewow i thought i was seeing things but it was an update and a wounderful one at that plz keep going plz |
| Moony that Chick in Black 2007-07-15 ch 3, | abuseOMG! That was like so surprising! I like didn't expect this! |
| Sushi Chi 2007-07-15 ch 3, | abuseWhen I finished reading this chapter I was speechless.Or actually, i literally said, "Oh. Ooh." Kinda thing. Got a big mess here, don't'cha? And I bet by the end of the story,everything will be worked out, yes? I do hope so. |
| cobalt elysium 2007-07-15 ch 3, | abuseThank God the plot bunnies live! I would have reviewed the amazing first two chapters but i didn't think you'd keep at it. I'm psyched that you are! Such a brilliant idea, and hasn't been portrayed in the way in which you have. Very original and I'm much in love with this. Chapter one was brilliant, delirously hot thinking of Tom in the clothes you had him in, and the reactions as well. Esepcially Booker, with his great little, "I have a problem" line. Sleeze but god do I love this. And chapter two, the self loathing Tom has for himself, "troll" and "**" and "disgusting" , "used" and "filthy" the way you use descriptions and head dialogue is amazing. It really was a remarkable first two chapters Especially the way you ended it. Now, Chapter three was simply brillaint, it was defiantly worth waiting for. Bookers such a **.. .. You know what I hate the most, is that we know they both ike each other, that we know there are strong feelings for another, and we know that all they have to do is go and say it. But they won't, because they don't know that and it's so extremely frustrating, but it makes for a great little story. Before confronting Dorothy I'd have a helluvalotta protction, a gun, sheild, bat, stick, you name it. Lmao, "No man had the right to be that good looking and then look orgasmic at a diner" what a brilliant line. It's definatly cruel to make Depp so god damn looking, this is the reason we adore to 'torture' him. Makes up for what we know we can't have *sobs* ...Booker's a little protective isn't he. Oh, you're going to die Tom. Its bad too, because sometimes there's just such a nice side of Booker you write, but i mean, i know where its going and why he's acting nice, but i can't help and feel, "aw gee, Tom has someone to conifde in" and then realizing that he doesn't. Because Booker wants what we all do. "Ok, now that kid in a candy shop metaphor seems kind of perverted."- lmao, ah, and you have humor. Not that I didn't notice it before, but some lines really grab me. And the line about being legal, well, haven't we all asked that when faced with watching Jump Street? Your descriptions are fantastic by the way, very vivd and amazing and...they really place you in a position of the story. I love it. I love this and hey, i love you for writing the story i'm in love with :P Ae you allowed to write Booker's fantasy's like that? ?!?!? What!?! Tom asked!? Already!!? ..and what a heck of lie you pulled off. And, of course, Tom's gullible enough. And what a chapter ending. I adore good chapter endings, y'know, the ones that ut you on your seat, leave with something or have such a cliffhanger...yours had all of that. An amazing chapter luv, glad you updated once more. Hope this helped your fix ;) |
| rubydoo 2007-07-10 ch 2, anon. | abusehey this is good please update. i think you should finish this. and what is doug thinking and what about booker. i think harry and judy should get togeather. thank you |