ahh wow nice and touching story! So sad!! I wish you didn't end it yet...

AHH!! More..More..story aboute john as he turn into one of those Wraith.

Please hurry up!

I thought this was great! I think it's something that should have been brought up in the episode, but obviously with time constraints, wasn't even considered...

Thank you for writing it.

Another great story, written by my buddy! Great job...I liked how you kept it flowing with the real plot...something which could have easily happened and not kill the story...Great piece of work!

NO! Too sad! Good job we know what happens next! Real nice job, Carson, perceptive and cuddly, hmm. This was terrific, great piece of drama. Well done.

Aw. It's so sweet!

Yeah, great, and you didn't deviate from the established plot in any way shape or form. Great, job, looking forward to "The Lost Boys" tag that you're writing.

Love it! Love it! Love it! This is such a great twist to this episode. I'm so jealous I didn't think of it myself. Great job!

Moo.

Hello;
I really like your story, And I hope you continue. I am toatlly in love with the thought of Sheppard and teyla together, your story is most original. Looking forward to more chappies. Very interesting.

Oh! Exciting! Any chance of making this an AU story where she does get it or something?

Anyway, please continue, please.

interesting turn on the episode, well written, so please continue soon

PLEASE DO A THIRD CHAPTER! PLEASE! I'M BEGGING! I WON'T BE ABLE TO SLEEP NOT KNOWING WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT! AND I HAVEN'T SLEPT A WHOLE NIGHT THROUGH FOR OVER A WEEK!PLEASE!

This is what the episode was missing...in my point of view...I love it...I could see how Sheppard would be concerned about Teyla...you must post at least one more chapter...Very good!

Yes, the button does look tempting, keep it coming. I'm really liking this.