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Nairojam
2008-02-21
ch 1,
abuseI know it's been a long time since you've worked on this series, and I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed them.
Fafhrd
2006-07-09
ch 1,
abuseHi, this is a pretty good story. Overall I think it's one of the better stories here on My one criticism is that Ranma seems to really be fitting into the high society element really well, and you haven't really explained that development of his character, it seems really fast. Keep the chapters coming
Innortal
2006-03-24
ch 1,
abuseWeird, and very nice. Well done.
The Bug
2006-01-24
ch 1,
abuseIt took me a while to get around to reading this, for no other reason then length. The sheer length daunted me. But now that I have, I have to say BRAVO. I had a bit of trepidition when it opened with Ryoga, but it was quickly availed by the interesting plot twist's throughout. I think this is one of the most interesting plot twist's I've seen to date. Especially centering around the lost boy.

I also have to say, If for no other reason, I would love this for the sheer use of the line "Pigs CAN fly!"
Awesome one liner man, just awesome.

I hope you do type up and post the Devil Caller, or Wonder Girl 1/2 or whatever you plan to call Ryoko's future adventure's under the wonder girl mantle. I have to say, this is shaping up to make this off shoot of the DC universe more and more interesting. And I can't wait to see what other suprises are in store for we the reader's.

Please, for the sake of all that is fan fiction, continue with this, well, with this and with Robin one half, both are among the best fan fiction I've ever read, even if this is only one chapter, it is one awesome chapter.

Anyways, here's hoping the future bring's more of this DC-Ranma-flavoured goodness.
dennisud
2005-12-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseI'm still figuring out s to whom Ryouga is to become as I'm not as familiar to that part of the DC universe. Wildebeast is the closest though that might suit Taro more.

Great side story and another worth continuing.

dennisud
Raven Hufflepuff
2005-10-29
ch 1,
abuseI like this one!
Ryoko is awesome!
Silver Warrior
2005-10-19
ch 1,
abusenow that’s cool! Ryoga got triple cursed? First Spring of Drowned Pig, then Spring of Drowned Twins, then the Spring of Drowned Girl followed by the Chusuiton. Man, that’s horrible luck even for him.
SamuraiSirius
2005-10-05
ch 1,
abuseWow, Ryoga/Ryoko is awesome! I hope you do continue the Ryoko story line as it's really good...course maybe that's because I LOVE Ryoga! ^_^

Keep up the great work!
-erica
Wonderbee31
2005-09-28
ch 1,
abuseReally impressed with this, and the point of Ryoga becoming Wonder Girl, really nice. I do hope you do a continuation of this storyline, as well as look forward to more Robin 1/2.
Steffan
2005-09-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseOk. The scene I wanna see is when the Chinese Amazons meet the Greek Amazons. I bet Cologne and Hyppolita would get along like a house afire.

So when Artemis shows up... where's she gonna go first? NYC, where Donna (last I heard) and Ryoko are, or Gotham to visit Ranko? And what *will* Diana think of all this?

Enquiring minds want to know!

^_^
Stratagemini
2005-09-22
ch 1,
abuseGotham is New York, just like Metropolis is Chicago and Coast City is L.A., D.C. doesn't use the real names. Also, when Ranma and Ryouga meet you have Ryouga saying that he didn't know ranma was the red head who knocked him off teh cliff, but Earlier in the chapter when Tonic tells him he's linked with Ranma, he figured it out.
JSB
2005-09-22
ch 1,
abuseWell, at least some of Ryoga isn't evil, I prefer him or her in this case to at least be on the good side. This is interesting and I hope you continue this. Keep it up.
Jerry Unipeg
2005-09-22
ch 1,
abuseGREAT START!
StorytellerSJK
2005-09-22
ch 1,
abuseI LOVED it. Please continue this. I am a big fan of Robin 1/2 and the idea of Ryoga nee Ryoko becoming Wonder Girl is, in the words of Ron Weasley, bloody brilliiant. I also love the nemsis you've given her. It's feels like there is so much potential here for more stories and you will continue them when you get a chance. Now all I'm left wondering is who you are going to make Superboy... Tenchi maybe to go with 'Ryoko'? :) Well regardless great job and I eagerly await more. TTFN.
Dumbledork
2005-09-22
ch 1,
abuseGreat story. So Ryoga got a lot of new powers but Ranma none yet. I'm sure Ranma will get them later on as one of the charas in the regular stories (if I remember correctly) said that Ranma wasn't a metahuman yet. So what powers will he get?
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