 Kay Em2 2005-09-22 . chapter 1It's always good to see a new Charles fic, especially one as well written as this one.
Loved it, and it was nice to see these 2 get together. One teeny point - I think maybe a sentence or two explaining why Charles has changed (given what he said to her about his own feelings) would make this ending absolutely right! :-) |
 trek-grrrl 2005-09-21 . chapter 1Very cool, liked it. Short and sweet. You depicted both of the main characters very well, and it was all believeable. Of course, I thought it was going to be ANOTHER Red Cross worker, wink wink... don't wanna spoil that little surprise though. |