Wow, amazing stories. You are a excellent writer. One of the best I have ever read in my years or reading fan fiction (and actual books). Keep up the great work. Im looking forward to Chibi legends (very impatiently). Thanks for all the amazing writing!

Yukixshuu

NO...*huff huff* It was too soon! why did it have to end!?! WHY?!? Tina, so help me, if the sequal isn't out soon, I'll not only hunt you down and cause horrible, unspeakable things to happen to you, but will kidnap you, chain you to a bolted down table and force you to write if you want to eat! Two years ago, your work not only started me on the path to becoming an author but also proved that fanfiction was is more than a trekkie thing, and i won't alow writing like yours to slip away.

awesome end there! cute cute!


^^ good work!

HA HA!! back from the dead for now!
hooray, very happy ending!
the thought of a crayon colored world for Naruto was very funny, especially when I imagined it. It kinda describes his mindset: like a child, which is basically what he is!
very good job, I commend you!

Awwh. I'm sad it's over. :( Ah, well. IT was good, even to the end. :)

Awesome great story Cant wait to read the Legends Chibi style LOL.


-the4th-

Very good work. Looking forward to Chibi Legends, as you aren't the first to try this idea of their children (including myself in a fanfic that I think I've uploaded on here, though not in full), but I imagine you're putting a lot of thought into it. Kind of an Avatar ending with the lack of violence and yet a significant lesson learned. And the fluff is always appreciated, heh. Keep up the good work

Hehe, all so cute. So Itachi is technically in rehab. I look forward to the next part.

Nice, weddings are in the air! I can't wait to see how married life suits our favorite couples!

After reading both this story and it's predecessor, "Awakenings", back to back. All I can say is... MORE MORE MORE !

It like "Awakenings" receives a rating of 4.5 out of 5 stars on 'FavoritesTracker org' under the acct:EvilDaveCanada as being almost perfect.

I havn't yet given a rating of 5 out of 5 stars.

Can't wait for the next chapter

Awesomeness. The only thing to describe it. Though somewhat corny at times, the writing style is excellent. Please continue to update. You do an awesome job.

Very cool chapter, nice fights and I'm glad Sasuke activated the Ougi!

AWESOME your back and very nicely done with the chapter. I enjoyed it very much hope ya update soon


-the4th-

A bit rushed, but I'd probably be equally guilty of the same kind of speeding to the end. The Uchiha Ougi would need to be elaborated more upon, but I imagine either it is a Zen kind of explanation or an explanation that does rely on the theme you've emphasized between Sakura and Sasuke. And the mini Kyuubi does seem to be a new factor since it's uncontrollable and all. And well, technically, aren't there still more Akatsuki that need to be defeated? Even if Kisame, Sasori and Deidara were all soundly defeated by next chapter somehow, there's still Pain (oh, geez, he's just...wow...), Konan, Hidan and Kakuzu, as well as the mysterious Zetsu, and that's if you're not bringing in "Tobi". Looking forward to it all, keep it up

OMG U ARE AN AMAZING WRITER! YOU SHOULD GO TO JAPAN AND WRITE SOME OF THE NARUTO EPISODES! I LOVE HOW YOU MADE KYUBI ALL CHIBI LIKE! HE'S SO CUTE! I'M A NARUHINA FAN AND SASUSAKU FAN, AND THIS FIC IS THE BEST I'VE EVER READ! KEEP AT TINABOT-SAMA! GANNBATTE!

-Abby ^_^