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| wind-master-redmoon 2007-08-20 ch 5, | abuseoh this is getting really interesting. can't wait for the next chapter |
| Wild Child 15 2007-06-10 ch 5, anon. | abuseOMG!!WOW!WOW!WOW!I LOVED IT!It's really good.Hope to read more soon.TTFN. |
| Oliviax3 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseo great opening chapter!! i was sucked in it was not crap at all! lol sry, im not good at long and juicy reviews...so this is it! =) |
| Alaena Night 2007-05-13 ch 1, | abuseLOL about your thoughts on "long and juicy" reviews. Those really are the best, huh? I found your profile while I was wandering around and I'm glad I did, because this story is quite cute! I checked out your profile and wanted to dance for joy! Someone who likes Trigun, Bleach and Miyazaki's movies? I love you already! This story is very good so far, and I like the way you wrote it! I was uncertain, though, which scenes were flashbacks and which were dreams and what was in the present until I looked over it a bit more. My favorite scene would be the flashback/dream sequence where she's underwater, praying for help. The description there is amazing. My favorite lines: “And you are…?” The beauteous dragon made a soundless roar which seemed pleasantly like a laugh. The one who heard your prayers… Just plain awesome! I love it. I will definitely have to keep reading. Hmm... well, I hope this was long and juicy enough! I see that it has been a while since this was updated, though... *gulp* Does that mean it's finished, or will I be stuck on a cliffhanger? Keep up the great writing. -Alaena |
| jakee 2006-07-16 ch 5, anon. | abuseWHA-? AIYA!! WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO CONTINUE?? WHEN! REI? HAHA! THAT WAS A SURPRISE! GO HAKU! YOU DA MAN! GO CHIHIRO! YOU DA WOMAN! ok... i'm done. that was a really good fic! seriously. your detail is so.. clear and vivid. i cant wait to read more of your stuff! cant wait till the next chap! jakee |
| Crystallynne 2006-06-23 ch 5, | abuseWoah! This story is so awesome! Write on! Write on! I can't wait to see what happens next. Nice cliffie, by the way... |
| VampLadyMegumi 2006-06-19 ch 5, | abuseGreat story please update soon! |
| kaliawai512 2006-06-14 ch 5, | abuseOMG, that ruled! I totally loved it! And the ending ruled! Man, you really have some talent here! This is awesome! Oh boy, I am SHAKING in wondering what happens next! Suspense, suspense, suspense! |
| TheSlytherinMuggle 2006-06-14 ch 5, | abuseUpdate fast, and the twist is okay, just dont over do it |
| Yangu Fuyu 2006-06-14 ch 5, | abuseErr, what was with the Tomatoes, potatoes and the Orange juice? Wanting something thrown at you? Lol. Eh anyways, Update soon! If you like the "twist" I'm sure I will... Although if I don't I'll tell ya when you've done it Lol |
| Vampirewitch 2006-05-29 ch 4, anon. | abuseThe suspense is killing me hurry up and update ! |
| Yangu Fuyu 2006-05-26 ch 4, | abuseYeah i'm sorri i reviewed last chap, ohwells didnt see the arrow, lol. Anyways. You meany! Update soon!! Lol |
| Yangu Fuyu 2006-05-26 ch 3, | abusehaha! Thats all Haku thinks about? Lol! I cant read jap either but put suppys (sp) on and you can see the spelling coz Chihiro says it... |
| kaliawai512 2006-05-24 ch 4, | abuseYAY!! I thought I was gonna be left hanging for good! I'm so happy! Thanks a ton for the update! The chapter was awesome, and I love your cliffie! My heart's still pounding from the intensity of this! You really should make this into a full-length fic (by that I mean keep writing until you can't write any more!)! Hope to hear more from you soon! But don't rush the chapter on my account. Take your time, I understand great writing needs lots of it, even for the really talented authors! |
| Weirdly 2006-04-02 ch 3, | abuseThat was awesome. I really liked the dreamworld thing, and I'm really eager to see how this'll turn out...update soon! I also liked Kohaku's reaction to Chihiro's friend...I do think he'd do that... Excellent job, in all. The only nit-picky problem I see is that it isn't 'Haku', it's 'Kohaku'. He has his name back, why wouldn't he use it, you know? Please update soon! -Weirdly (aka Rabid Bumblebee) |