I like a lot thos story . In your story , is balise a girl or a boy ? Did his mother kill her husband ? I'll wonder why harry wants the zabini .
I'll wait with impatience the next chapter !

ah you have to finish this story!! it's soo good but it's not finished! and you said you would finish it! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I want to know what happens!!

Thanks,
CodeRomance

That was interesting. Update soon.

This is a bloody awesome fic. You are a truely talented author.I love how you incorperate the established canon and run with it, those are my fav types of fanfics. Peter's voices are great, Lucius and Dumbledore are gloriously evil, and I can't wait to see Gellert! O...I'm not sure which would be more interesting: A Gellert who loves Albus and is delighted that he did so much for him or a Gellert who really was just using Albus. Both would be awesome in this fic. Harry and Draco's romance here is nice and smooth, it has a lead up that is belevable and tender. I can only imagine what will happen once everyone goes to Hogwarts.

I really really like your story. I think the developments in the story are believable, and I like the way you write your story. I really hope you'll update again soon! :)

hey, any chance of being updated? I think this is the most realistic... Dumbledore is a bad guy and Voldemort is harrys father type stories. I like it a lot.

I hope to read more chapters soon!

This story is amazing, there are few stories that I read up to the most recent chapter and mash my mouse button on the place where should link me to more of the juicy story. Yours is one. I'd like to thank you for this story, silly as it seems, because I know how hard it is to write this stuff, and keep at it. I know you may have some flames, or not that many reviews, but just keep at it. I'm aware that this is on hold, but I wait patiently for the next update, and I cant wait to see your characters develop more.

Love and fluffy kisses,
Randi~

That was an amazing first chapter, well done.

Are you ever going to update and/or finish this story? I love it, and barring RL episodes that might keep you from doing so, I really would like to see more. I adore the way you've got the storyline moving, and want to see what you have planned for Lucius--as well as something really GORY for Dumbledore's demise (because let's face it, the man HAS TO DIE).

There is very little wrong with your grammar--I may have noticed a mistake or two, but nothing too glaring. The story itself is captivating, however, the flashbacks get a bit monotonous imo. I would rather see a chapter or two totally devoted to the backstory and Voldemort's blackouts.

Please, please, please, update this story soon! I love it and actually went back and re-read until this last chapter and I am still completely into the story line!

great chapter update soon. ^_^ Ja.

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Just found this fic so some of these things others have likely commented on as you introduced them but...
First off all: I love the nursery rhyme chapter titles. So far, I've known all of them but there will likely come the day that you'll use an unfamiliar one and I'll have to go look it up. Don't you just hate it when reading a fic makes you learn new things *smirk**grin*
I also like the memories at the end of each chapter. It's an interesting way of providing backstory without actually having the characters get mired in memories or have alot of motivational conversation. I mean, really how often does a person review their motives?
Draco and Harry are going to be uncomfortable with each other for a short while until they figure out if they are attracted to each other and want a relationship or just want a friendship. Either way, they are likely going still be allies.
Love the fact that Harry goes to Snape for answers to his questions rather than his godfather. If that isn't an obvious sign of Harry's continued trust in Snape, I don't know what would be.
Narcissa being Voldemort's "most trusted" is a nice touch as
is the fact he sent her off to collect the horcruxes. We'll see what he has planned with those.
The negotiations for Snape, Narcissa and Draco was also a nice touch. The attempted stabbing of Voldemort with a fork was amusing once the surprise was over.
Harry is going to be so very careful while at Hogwarts. Dumbledore is going to push as to where Harry was actually located as well as try to counter the 'brainwashing' done. AB is also going to push Hermione, Ron and Ginny as to where they were and to manipulate them into betraying Harry's plans. It's going to be a rough time for all four. Will Harry show his new friendship with Draco - indicative of his turning Dark? Or is he going to attempt to shield that relationship in order to keep Dumbledore from trying to come between the boys/young men. Unfortunately, part of Harry's support system is not going to be available at the school - Remus, Sirius and Snape especially.
It should prove interesting what you have planned for the upcoming chapters.

This is a great story! I can't wait to see what comes next.

good story.