I just really like this story and I know you haven't update in a long time but I hope you aren't completely abandoning it. I really enjoy everything to write and hope that you continue all your stories and series. So please think about updating this soon!

aw this was cute and sweet. I wish you would end this even with a future chapter where they are a couple. Best oc fic ever.

It's a good story. Do you plan on continuing it?

its really good. cant wait until the next chapter

Ah poor Marty hahah,
looks like she has got some competition!
Love your story ;)

I was looking at the other stories you wrote and this one caught my eye. It is really wonderful!

just started reading this story and its really good. keep up the awesome work. i love the whole ryan/marty dynamic. it works really well. but dont let him get together with marissa. thats such a boring relationship lol'

now its getting interesting. i like the dynamic you're setting up with marty and marissa, a background of competitiveness will make the fight over ryan's affections that much better. can't wait to see how you create the triangle. update soon.

I dont like Marty personally. I like Marissa haha and Marty is mean to her.

Rm yay...but not Ryan marty haha. Anyways u r a good writer. just wish u wrote rm :(

can't wait till the next installment. it sounds good:)

interesting story, love the concept. marty slides easily into the oc story and creates another dimension to life in newport. hope to read more soon.

Ah. I love it! I added your story back when I was "Queen Em" and I went to check my favorite stories and yours was at the top and I was shocked!

Good to have you back.

that was awesome please please write more SOON i love this story!

Hey i dont normally read O.C fics,but i love this one!
Cant wait for an update!
Suzi xox

is that the end? if not please update soon