This is real good. We can't wait for more

hey,
like the way this is playing out. Giving Drizzt an adoptive son is a nice touch as well. He doesn't seem quite as honourable as our dearest ranger though, which personally I would like very much.
Wonder what kind of weapon it is they're all trying to get their hands on.

I like your descriptions with the drow child.

Please continue. I like how you are portraying Jarlaxle.

Still interesting, well written, and I'm looking forward to seeing where it all leads, and how Entreri will handle learning that his rival is still alive(if he does).Good job!

Well-written with an interesting plot. Please continue!

This looks like a good start to what could be an interesting story. I look forward to more.