 Vywien is me 8/9/06 . chapter 1Short and sad. [
I was looking at your profile. LOTR fan! Haha yay! ] |
 Deb-lil 10/9/05 . chapter 1I don't care that this is short. It was so strong. You did the job in a few short lines; something a lot harder to do then write a ten page essay as far as I'm concerned. It was creepy and well written. Praise unto you, Wargish. (?)
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 Cherry Chalk 9/27/05 . chapter 1I don't care how short this, I love how you have captured the arrogance and the pride of her. I |
 Werecat99 9/25/05 . chapter 1Powerful - whay more can I say? You've captured her arrogance perfectly. |
 TeenTypist 9/21/05 . chapter 1Very well done. Nicely eloquated (is this the right word, my brain is no longer functioning after that last Latin test). Very nice and in character. |