so far this is better than the published book 7. keep up the ravenclaw work

I am so glad I clicked on your story, it was totally awesome! I liked the fast pace,the collaboration - these people don't mess around! That orphanage was seriously creepy so you had the horror factor here and there. All your characters were in character, and I liked your version better than JKR's. I thought it was way better than sending the trio camping for a year. They got busy, that was so cool! The angle with Luna's mother, that was brilliant.
I felt really bad about Professor Flitwick and Mr. Tibbles though. Anyway, it was a very good read!

Your whole story has been excellent, but this chapter in particular ROCKS! If only canon Dumbledore would have been so crafty and forthcoming. I think he was brilliant, but since you wrote him that way, that means you're brilliant, heh?

Good story overall, yet I had hoped for a bit more development with the Luna/Harry relationship.

This is a great story, with many innovative ideas. You tie up so many loose ends it isn't funny, and I could see it happening with the canon characters.

Really glad I went to your profile to find this one. It was really good too. And, when you said that there wasnt really much emphasis on the pairings, although it was there, just in hidding or something, I was really happy to see that you'd followed through with that. See, I've tried reading a coulple others that say the same thing and when I get to the third-some chapter I get WAY annoyed to find out that ALL IT IS is romance when the genre says General/Action or something of the like.
ANYWAYS, I also found the plot to be REALLY original - but not anti-canon. I loved that - having Luna's necklace be a horocrux was a BRILLIANT idea . . . although there is the DeathlyHallows thing that says that they corrupt. But 1) You basically wrote this thing before the book came out (or I have horrible math skills, which could be it, but whatever) and 2) Im sure there's a way around that - perhaps cork has some sort of lead-like properties. You know, like lead stops radiation cork stops soulmagic? I dont know, but, whatever. The rest of your plot was pretty cool. I liked the portrait conversation with Dumbledore and, talking about portraits, I had ALWAYS wondered why they hadnt tried to get rid of Sirius' mum before like that . . . cleaning solutions work like magic, no half-pun intended.
Err? I cant really think of much more to write about here in this reveiw, so, PLEASE continue writing; all of your stories Ive read so far are absolutely BRILLIANT. I think it would be a crime if you didnt.
ANYWAYS: Great fic. Thanks for writing it; it was a great read.

Nice story.

Luna's father isn't very fatherly. What father would let a comment like "ruin anyone's life, lately" go unanswered?

a truly great story and a highly original way to go with the "the power he knows not" line congrats.

only question is where is the next few chapters fo harry and luna fluff? you leave it with them about to go in a date that is mean of you!

Well, it was good, but I would personally have liked to see more romance between Luna and Harry. Still, I liked it, keep up the good work!

This is far better than the "real" book 7. Bravo. :)

I have to say that it took me a moment to realize why Tom was wheezing... Good thinking on that (I have read only the first book, so I can only guess that it was your idea...)

I liked this story, even thought it was a bit too dark for me (too much known good guys dead...)

Well done!

Fun story with some Luna goodness. thankee.

That was a lot of fun and very nicely written.
I do like your smooth, readable style as well as your characterizations. I think you are just about the best at writing Luna, along with Bob and Alyx.
Thanks for several hours of reading pleasure - your hard work is appreciated.

As usual, interesting and well-written story. I enjoyed the little bits and pieces of innovation you added on the use of spells so that they never came down to two people standing on opposite sides of a room, yelling at each other, as many fics too. In that vein, I highly appreciate that you did not restrict this innovation to the good guys, but also had the Death Eaters learning how to counteract Ministry tactics and finding new ways to spread terror. The end battle with Voldemort was, in some ways, kind of anti-climactic, but it shows just how well Harry and the Ministry had done at wearing down Voldemort until he was weak enough to defeat. ^_^ I'll admit that I didn't catch on to the deoxygenation of the area until it was specifically pointed out. Anyhow, I enjoyed the story and I've put you on author alert so that I know when you come out with your next big thing. Hopefully, we'll hear from you soon.