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| Skitzo-phrenick 2008-07-19 ch 1, | abuseI don't know if you can really claim this to be a oneshot since nothing actually happend. Knives didn't even look at Meryl. HOW CAN I ENJOY THIS! *weeps with bitter frustration* Oh Meryl I'm with you!! *goes off to let her thing of Knives/Meryl happenings* |
| valheru 2006-02-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseA sequel qould be nice, to know of anything happened between Knives and Meryl. I hate open endings, especially to promising stories like this one. |
| angelstryke 2006-02-02 ch 1, | abuseThis fic was awesome. But the ending is so open! It cries for a sequel. Maybe even turn it into a full length fic instead, it has the potential. I hope you write more Trigun fics in the future. You'd be a welcome edition. |
| Sugar Pill 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseHm... interesting. Fascinating to think about all the little things that lead up to relationships, or anything in between. Nicely written! |
| Abbys 2005-10-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseHello. Good start. Please continue. I like your story and I enjoyed reading it. Continue to make new ideas and improve your writing skills. God bless. |
| hope-is-4ever 2005-10-01 ch 1, | abusePlease write a sequal to this! I like the way you portrayed Meryl's thoughts. A great fic! |
| smiling cat 2005-09-27 ch 1, | abuseIt surely is original. They usually make it fluffy or conflictual with Vash jelous or resigned; you managed to express normality and tranquility, I felt knives' cldness biting me while I read it. You should really write more about it. And remember: KxM forever! |
| SweetestChick 2005-09-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is different. In all the other stories, Knives at least acknowledged Meryl was there. KxM all the way! |
| Kritikos 2005-09-23 ch 1, | abuseVery quaint. I really enjoyed this little ficlet. I think you should write a sequel! (In fact, I think you should make it into a story -shrug-) |
| Anonymous 2005-09-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt shouldn't be a oneshot. Leaves me unsatisfied. Tbere should be more. |
| Celesma 2005-09-22 ch 1, | abuseNice ficlet; I would gladly read a sequel. ^_^ |
| inkydoo 2005-09-21 ch 1, | abusehaha meryl likes knives...and vash CAUGHT HER! i'm a vxm kind of girl, but this fic is good. a sequel is not a bad idea. |