Hey! Why is it poke shipping?? I WANT ADVANCE SHIPPING!!

ow...wow! awesomeness! yaho! more plz!

I love this story!!

Wow. Just...wow.

So I totally did not expect it to be from May's POV first of all when I read the summary so that was a nice twist. I love how you just start telling the story from the middle of any day but the reader can completely understand what is going on.

Seeing Ash and Misty's relationship from the eyes of someone else, especially someone I don't really know (cause I haven't watched pkmn since before Misty even left) has been very refreshing and an eye-opener to their relationship as a whole. Very lucid writing style and smooth flow.

I'd have to say though, I feel bad for May but seems like she understands the AAML bond.

Fav lines:

"I wasn't looking at you. I was looking at the area around you."

"And what's that supposed to mean?"

"Exactly the way it sounds!"

Awesome work! *Maura*

I have to say that this was one of the most touching stories I've read.

I've never liked May, and always hated the fact that she and Ash are sometimes paired together. But, your fic intertwines her feelings and pokeshipping so incredibly well. The raw emotion in May's narration, and the descriptions of Misty and Ash's relationship really tugged at my heart.

I especially loved the last line: "She makes you happy." Hope to read more from you!

~RHRF

More “Misty and May” stories need to be written like this! I’m happy to see this fanfic didn’t turn the two girls into vicious enemies fighting over Ash (like so many fanfics do). May likes Ash, but matures enough to understand that he likes Misty, thus May must forever keep her feelings secretive. Heck, May even grows to RESPECT Misty, which I applaud. The experience is undeniably difficult for May, but it helps her mature for the best. She’s actually happy for Ash and Misty, instead of attempting to come between them. Because of that, I was impressed with this story, and impressed with you as the author for writing a mature and believable “Misty and May” fanfic. Kudos!

Oh, that was so cute! Misty and Ash's relationship is a weird one, but it's just indisputable. They're meant for each other xD haha. Pokemon was never the same without her..
I'm glad you brought her back, and the start was one of the best parts of the fic. Where Ash is lost, and Misty is yelling at him for it. Brock muttering under his breath about 'old times'.
Also, it's great that you included how Brock was happy about her return! A lot of Authors completely forget about him and how he would be happy to see Misty, so it's great that you've included that.
May's POV is interesting, and it's realistic I think. Her realisation that 'you love her' is slightly comical, but also incredibly sweet.
When Ash is about to give up in battle is cute, too, that Misty gives him the confidence (the word I want is something else.. but I can't get it.) to win it and not give up.
It's cool to see their relationship from someone else's POV!

Nice one-shot!
xCNx

Hm... Good for May I kinda hate her GO MISTY
I only hate May tho when she is with Ash or actually liking Ash... May belongs with Drew...
Misty Belongs with Ash and
The new girl Dawn belongs with the purple hair dude Paul
every1 happy
:D

From the summary, I felt like there was to be bashing on May with just the same old stupid drama. But I got something refreshingly better. Instead of the story being from May's view as a jealous lover, you write her more as the understanding observer. I really liked that.

It was great!

that...was...beautiful!!

not bad. the pov is a bit confusing at first, though. and its a bit angsty towards the end, but the magebear supposes thats to be expected, considering the plot. good job.

I loved it!!
...
yepp. thats right May. You better back off!
Omg this was so good!! I loved it!

This was another, once again, really great piece of work from a PokeShipper like you!

The ending was so SWEET ^-^! I nearly cried! Don worry May I am sure you will find your soul mate, which I sure will Drew ^_^.

Keep On Writing!