very good, looking for the next update!

Just a thought, seeing as how I just watched the movie again the other day... but he was angry that the grandma died, not really the one to make it happen. He was angry because she wasn't where he planned her to be when he wanted things to go down, but was forced to be in the airplane for it.

So I've been going back through the Red Eye archives, and yours really caught my interest. Are you from Florida? Because most people outside of the Southeast haven't even heard of Publix (I've lived in a lot of places, but I'm just north of Miami now).
Anyways, this was really good. I loved the varied POV, and especially the last section (although the bit about making the guy fall into the jams was hilarious).
A good way for them to meet without making it too memorable for Lisa. And the way Jackson spun his lie so easily was very well-written.
Awesome.

Wow. I saw the movie "Red Eye" and I was completely freaked out (but the end where she kicked his butt was ok). The category says "general/romance"... does that mean you have more in store for these people?

All though, I do have to admit the guy who plays Jackson can either look cute or creepy... depending on what character he is.

this is really good!

aww dude that is hella mean!

lol

BEE SEEIN' YA

PEROXIDE

*blinks* Damn that was perfect making Lisa's mother be a target to get Lisa out of Miami for the plan to work. Great idea. Neways, keep up the great work.

Hi ... um ... you wanted a review. I think this is great stuff. Though I have to confess I have not seen this movie! So ... I've probably spoiled the movie for myself at least partially, but I had a damn good time doing it.

i REALLY didn't expect that last turn and i was in shock-mode for a minute!! wonderfully written and an insanely interesting peice of work! keep on writing!

This is so good! No not good, Great. Especially the ending. I wouldn't be suprised if a sequel comes out to red Eye and we learned that Lisa's Grandma died becuase of Jackson's mission. Or maybe I should alreayd know that from the movie? Oh well, this is really interesting, please continue.

Good!...or rather fanstic..hope you post another soon!

!GASP! Wasn't expecting the whole grandmother thing. Good job, update soon!

Lovely chapter! I enjoyed the way Jackson seemed territorial about Lisa when he discovered the other man following her. But Jackson had something to do with her grandmother's death? Bastard! Anyways, excellent update. You must make your next one soon. I'll be checking for it. Keep it up! :)

Please write more!

oh that's awful!
i mean the story is intriguing but i can't believe they'd kill g'ma henrietta :(
(clever idea, you!)
thinking of it this way, it makes that whole tex-mex scene in the movie so much more poignant
nice, though. excited to see where this goes.