Sweet^^ Little and sweet... like chocolate?^^
Yup.
I liked it
sayo

wah~! fluff to the max! i love how you got my heart beating in anticipation of xell's answer ^_^;

It was yummy. :D ^.^

KYAH~! KAWAII~!

Very cool, I like your portrails of Filia.

That was really, really cute!

-Ahria

! That was adorable! I think it could have used a bit more description of Xelloss' tone and mannerisms, because sometime it's difficult to imagine him as himself when he's saying those things. It's so hard to replicate a character like him in a romance fic, lol. Either way, you did a great job!
Keep Writing!
~May

wow.@_@ its different..

it IS.slightly OOC but.great fic!

super cute...!

::sigh:: This was wonderful, without being too mushy! I think I'll go see if you've done anything else.

::starry-eyed:: good... more... more.....

all i can say is AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! that was the best G rated fic i ever read!!!!!

Oh, I really liked this story. Quite in character, I might add. ^-^

Cuteness! OK, so I'm a little Xel/Fi obsessed... *giggles* Nice job!

^^ Aw. It was cute~.