3 this.

This was sad. Really sad.

It was a bit short, but it suited your story. I have to say, I loved the way you portrayed Peter. It sent shivers up my spine. If you wouldn't mindcand have time, would you read my story? Any way, I loved the last line.

This is really brilliant... Sad, paranoid, manipulated, a character I love to despise now suddenly human. Great, great job. Brevity truly is the soul of wit. Much congrats!

-O.D. Scribbler

oh... sadness... but I think you got Peter's reasoning really well.

Ohh, DIS. This is what happens when people make fun of others...*evil crazy smile*

Finaly someone divulges into Peter's pychy instead of jut saying he's a good for nothing traitor. You'd get more reviews if you put this under the Peter Pettigrew catgory. Yes there is one for the minority of his fans. Later.

Oh my gosh, this is such a good story. It's really sad, but really good. I never really thought of why Peter would betray them, but this makes sense. A lost boy who gets picked on by everyone, including his 'friends'. I can imagine that he would love to take out his hurt.

A little short, but to the point, I like the idea of what was going through Petigrew's mind though I'm not a fan of his. Keep up the good work.

Whoa. That was one of those punch-in-the-gut stories. I always imagine Peter as being sort... threatened into Voldie's ranks, and ends up being too scared to leave. But wow, I think that right there is the mor canon-like version. That was brillaint.

RBR

wow that was deep

HOW have I never read this before! You are the only person I've ever met (except me) who feels this way about Pettigrew! This is so weird.

I love it.

OMFG

This is actually, really chilling, this story. Well done!

this is exactly how I picture Peter, not all bad at first, but joined up with Voldemort as revenge against his "friends" . The last line was just spine-chilling

lat line is chilling...perfect