Wow. that's all i can think of 2 say.

that was pretty awesome for some one that says that they dont know that much about ff7ac great job i loved the movie,and your story tho short got across a message that was kinda hidden an beautiful.

Very in character. :) Short and to the point. Well written, I'd say.

This was SO CUTE! Loz is so cute when he says my favorite 'puppy-dog' line, "I'm Not crying!" I could just imagine him having cute little puppy eyes and a slight pouty lip while saying this! Keep on writing!

whoa o.o Very short...but very very very good XD
you did a wonderful job with this! I applaud you!! :claps:

When you don't have knowledge on the game, you read fics and try to go with what you have. There's plenty enough reference in AC as well for a whole set of stories.

My co-author had no info about the game either but she wrote such an excellent Kadaj to my Loz, it was a sight to behold. If I were you, I'd try to lenghten this story, either with interaction, or Loz's thoughts. I think you'd be able to do that, as this one-shot was actually neatly executed.

Pretty good for a oneshot, short but sweet. :3

*O* I loved your story! It simple, but so deep. I can't write like that, and I tend to go into details that don't connect to the point. =/

Was that Kadaj crying at the end? =O Sorry, but I'm slow. Your characters were so real, and I loved it, as I said before. =D

*favs*

I felt really bad for you, so... >( Delete the scout comment!

I'm afraid I have to say that you're a sorry excuse for a writer and one hell of a bad critiquer. I think you should just stop writing and get your sorry ** out of the buisness. Do you even think this story was sad? Like hell it was! Who the hell do you think you are, you ** **?

Delete this if you want.

^_^ Don't worry, you did a good job with this one. I

Incredibly effective! Well done, I really like it :)

utterly simple, but very nice. :DD loz is so...something in this fic. you just feel for him...

There's not much I can say given its length. For what it is, it was good, well written, accurately characterized. It feels like it could have been much deeper though, if you had lengthened it and maybe done a bit more psychological exploration of the characters. Why is it that Loz is always the one to cry, whereas the other two are exceptionally cold, for example. :)

I liked it. I haven't seen Advent Children either. So awesome! Short, but cool. Good job. Cookie for you.