Gosh! I just spent a ridiculously long amount of time reading this from START to FINISH. You are that amazing hun. I seriously love Toriko. You tried very, very hard to keep her from being a mary-sue and it shows beautifully. I have to say that I miss Reeve and Co. hijinxs. They were, by far, some of the funniest parts of the entire story. And while I wish I could go on forever about the magnificence of PYLO I really have got to ask--do you think you'll ever update again?

Hi! I just wanted to ehm... point out something about Nanashi and Sephiroth. So, here's the thing: about halfway into the chapter: "... but seeing as Nanashi was only five-foot-nine and the Demon was six feet tall with a matching weight..."

ONLY 5.9? That is about 180cm (I checked), don't you mean 4.9? ... and Sephiroth is supposed to be tall, is he not? 6.0 feet is only about 183cm D'x (I have a classmate that's 192cm tall!)

Sorry, I just had to say it, it's something that's bugged me since the first time I read this totally awesome and fantastic fic. (This is like... the fifth time I read it! :P) I hope I didn't bug you too much!

/SoDesuKa

Please hurry back soon

please hurry back soon

Hello, how's life? I'm still here. :D (Please Update) ::puppy Zack eyes::

...and this review is for the last chapter! as i have already reviewed once a while ago, i had to do it on another chapter. the whole lounge scean is STILL my favorite out of this entire story and i used to go to ren fairs so i know the song. i don't know the singer you named, but i bet he was not as good as the ren singers, the sexy sirens of sin. they don't have a cd or anything, but they were sung bawdy songs a couple years ago at the penn ren faire.

anyway, now the customers are giving me weird looks. i almost gave an old guy a heart attack! i was laughing so hard at the song part that i was actually gasping, "Oh god, it hurts" and i'm still red in the face. he walked in right when i said that and HIS face turned red and he kinda jumped and fell into the door. i feel bad, but it got worse. i tried to tell dave why i was laughing and could only say "bomb, naked" and then try to sing the song and only got "ring" out.


...i'm still laughing...

ok, here i am again, reviewing. i only did this not to long ago!! but i had to make a comment on the whole jelly fish scene. OMG! i had dave, my boss, read it and at least this time, i wasn't the only one dieing of laughter.

my fiancee told me a story once of when he worked at a fish market. one of his customers bought an octopus and froze it in a bowl. then he put it un the toilet and closed the lid. well, it was starting to defrost by the time his wife came in to use the bathroom and she didn't look when she sat down. apperntly the cold, wet, slimmy feeling of it freaked her out enough that she ran out of the bathroom with her pants still around her ankles! this chapter kinda reminded me of that so i just had to share it!!

you know, everytime i reread this story, i can't help but laughing hysterically at this chapter!! i got a couple REALLY weird looks from my boss and he even asked me what i was on. lol... i shouldn't be reading this at work, but it's so boring today. which is probably why i'm reviewing this story again. i've done it a couple times before too. anyway, just one question, when will you update this again? don't rush it, but i would really like to read a new chapter of this story sometime. it is one of my favoites.

quoting the the stupid guy who said this guy who said this
(Sephiroth is left handed. If he could use both hands, he wouldn't be ambidextrous (both right handed), he'd be ambisinistrous (both left handed). You're an **, and I hope you lose your right arm, **.)

ambisinistrous = Equally clumsy with either hand,
ambidextrous = Equally adept with both hands

Gods! The mental image of Sephiroth (naked!) combined with the Scotsman Song... I was literally in tears I was laughing so hard.

Yeah, a new chapter!

This story is awesome =]

Oh. I like the concept you have going on here.

The telepathy thing is a nice add. Congrats on such an original story thus far.

I'm so glad you updated the story, I absolutely love it and I really don't care that there are 121 chapters. I started reading this story when you were at around chapter 50 and have read it ever since. Good luck in school. ^^

so your boyfriend got you a psp and CC for your birthday? i find that amusing as my fiancee did the same exact thing! i beat the game in regular mode and then opted up to do it on hard when it asked if you wanted a new game on hard. its so awesome that you keep everything and you level! i just wish that it kept the freaking misions too! i can never get them all! what really sucks is that because we are broke, he got me a used copy,and now after logging over 135 hours between the to game, mostly trying to do missions, it freaking broke! the psp, not the game.

about angeal, you have to remember that even as great as the graphics are, it will never be as good as a hand drawn pic! from what my friend was telling me, the systems that are used to create thing for games can only do so much. they start with a basic human figure and you have to build it up with all the details. but they all start the same way and that's probably why it looked like that. but you have to admit, he did look more rugged than sephiroth or genesis, even in the game.

a tip about the missions. while there are some that you have to specially unlock, most open at various times in the game. so if you wait until just before you enter the glowing door way at the end, you can do mission after mission and knock off most of them right there. if you can figure out how to pass them. there's been a couple missions that i just can't pass for the life of me! i can only get up to about 93% of the missions done, then i get stuck. and with my psp now broken, it can't even work on it! arg!

but anyway, i was so happy that you updated! it's been so long and i so love this story! it's a massive story and so freaking complex at points that it just sucks you in and it doesn't let you go. keep up the good work, a can't wait to see what to-chan will do once sehpy turns insane. now, is it going to follow ff7, the original? i never played it, but i know a little about it from playing the DoC and CC, along with the movie AC and MANY fanfics. or are you going to end it there?

anyway, this s a lot longer than i usually make my reviews, when i bother to. but update again soon! i absolutely love this! especially the chapter when his car gets blown up and he ends up sitting in the waiting room naked! i almost died laughing!!