Mystyre 2008-09-26 . chapter 20Is it really the end? Has it really been four years since Aftereffects? I don't want it to go away...
This chapter was really heart-wrenching and completely fitting. I mean, who honestly thought that the Titans were going to have happy endings? I think the last time I felt this way was when I was watching "Things Change" and couldn't believe what had happened. That night I convinced myself in a dream that Terra would remember Beast Boy eventually and they would all live happily ever after. But that wouldn't be real.
So here you are, at the end of three amazing, addicting stories. I realize that this may very well be your farewell to fanfiction, but please don't stop writing. As long as you think, as long as you learn and grow and become yourself, write. And even though there are people like me who love to read what you write, never make writing an obligation.
What else can I say? Congratulations doesn't seem powerful enough. Wow doesn't seem expressive enough. Everything you felt as you wrote this chapter was passed on through your words, so I think you know how I feel. Good on you.
Mystyre |
raerob4ever 2008-09-24 . chapter 20A hauntingly beautiful ending.
I must admit, tears were shed and Kleenexes were used while re-reading the last few chapters. I could not have asked for a better conclusion to a great trilogy.
Such a good story would normally deserve a lauding review with many exclamation marks but this, which surpasses nearly every story that I have read (which had those exclamation-mark-filled reviews) left me calm, pensive, and very, very satisfied.
Thank you so very much for this story. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
-Dinky |
psycicflower 2008-09-24 . chapter 20Wow. After all this time it's actually over. Very bitter-sweet ending. Can't imagine how hard it is for both of them losing senses so integral to them, they're ability to properly perceive others. Robin can't read anyones body or facial expressions while Raven loses all the insights her powers gave her.
Poor Mina as well, poor everyone actually, but atleast they all seem to be happy, even if it was at a cost.
Thanks for a great story. |
ray1 2008-09-24 . chapter 20Well, Slade is gone, but so is Cyborg sadly. Robin is blind, and Raven is completely human. For every blessing, an equal punishment. A great ending to a great series of stories. |
It'sTimeToDance 2008-08-28 . chapter 1two reviews my butt.
good story :) |
Mystyre 2008-06-03 . chapter 19Wow.
I'm sorry I didn't review sooner. I read it and didn't have time to give it the review it deserved so I had to come back later.
Wow.
Whatever qualms you may have had about how to portray Hell are insignificant now, because you did a fantastic job. You made it seem more personal instead of just all fire and misery; I like how each person suffers according to their own fears. My favorite part of the story was Robin running around with his shoes too big. "Take those off. You could never fill them." The depth of that sentence is mindblowing. It seems subtle but I can feel all the emotion that's behind it. I thought that was a fantastic touch.
I guess I'll have to wait to see what those sacrifices are, hm? Hopefully you'll be faster with the epilogue than I was with this review!!
Once again, an incredible chapter and a riveting story; I know you'll finish this off with a bang.
By the way, there's a comic storyline out right now that has to do with the return of Trigon, in case you're interested. It's under the title "Titans" |
Guardian of Azarath 2008-05-10 . chapter 19Excellent chapter. :) I rather liked the portrayal of hell. I guess i'm gonna have to re-read this fic at some piont, just to refresh. :P |
psycicflower 2008-05-10 . chapter 19I really, really shouldn't be reading this right now, I'm in the middle of working on an essay that's already late, but screw it my sleep deprived and over worked mind needs it and I'm so glad I did read it now rather than later. This was just wow.
Your hell is excellent. Many people don't really grasp how bad the whole eternal damnation thing is meant to be but you really showed it here. I loved how it wasn't just the whole burning in flames for all of time but that it was also all the various psychological fears and demons, much worse than physial torment. Adored the whole idea of Robin not being able to fill the shoes and Robin's protection instinct kicking in.
"Sacrifices were made." I'm now very worried about how unhappy of an ending this is going to have.
Time to go back to the books, and lecture notes, and online journal articles *sighs* but I can't wait for the next part.
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$p!R1t 0f tHe N!gHt 2008-04-01 . chapter 18 *dies* *dies again*
*comes back to life * OMG! that was so wicked...loved how they both died at the sametime *grins sadistically* the last chapter was a little confusing but totally worth it *glomps insanity101*...and i loved the ring, beautiful design... ok so WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER COMING? I can't wait i've been checking back everyday since after you updated and I am dying here...plz plz plz plz plz update...Oh and can you like give us a flashback like thing of what Slade did to Raven? I know its a lot to ask but I want to know what he did to her that made her go all darkside *grins*... Mina liked Robin and now she's scared of him...She's a pretty cool character comes in number three after Raven and Robin on my fave TT list ;) Raven was very EVIL when she attacked Robin in the warehouse (one of my fave parts)...Poor Robin he goes through so much angst and pain especially in your fics *smirks* but then again its worth it seeing as your such an awesome author XD... So is Robin gonna stay dead or come back to life?? And I love Scarecrow one of my favourite villains he is so Evil in your fic Mwahahahahaha. Are you sure you didn't help the writers of Teen Titans *squints suspiciously* you write Robin and Slade so well completely in character with Slade being calculating, cruel and smooth just like in the series... I think Catalyst has to be THE best out of your trilogy with a twist (thats what i call it the twist being your one-shot hope you don't mind) Aftereffects was nice, Broken was better but Catalyst roxx... I think I'll shut up now so you can stop thinking of ways to torture me for this review...XD May Robin plushies rain upon you with lots of chocolate... Oh and I got you a present for bearing this torturing stupid review...*drags Robin out from behind her tied up and with a big PINK bow on his head* sorry was the only colour I could find the bow in *Robin glares at her* I stole Robin from DC comics he's all yours now... *Robin glares some more and mutters somthing under his breath that sounds like "can't beleive i got kidnapped by a stupid girl"* anyway enjoy while i run from the Dc comics people...*hands Robin to insanity101 and starts running* "not the pitchforks and hey... its too early for flaming torches..." catch ya later... have fun with Robin *wink*
PS: are you a girl or a boy? I'm very confused here?!?! |
Daughter of a demon 2008-03-21 . chapter 18well then... i am absolutely... what was that British term? oh yes, i am absolutely gobsmashed! over the course of like, 2 days, i read all three parts of this trilogy thing (i know, no life, right?). i think i've read aftereffect and broken previously, but this story just blew me away... i've noticed that the stories i really really like i don't review until i get to the end- i can't stop reading after every chapter to review. and these three were no exceptions. you have done well, young skywalker, and i shall send you your virtual basket of cookies once this story is finished- that's a promise! in the meantime, this has been favorites'd. *sigh* please update soon! |
Guardian of Azarath 2008-02-19 . chapter 18That was a nice touch, sending Robin along for the ride. :) And I wondered what would happen if Slade was ever hit with Crane's toxin. Hope you update soon. |
Azyrian 2008-02-19 . chapter 18O.O
Oh my god! You killed Cyborg...you've...you.
YOU ARE PLAYING GOD!
And I be likin' it.
I devoured that like a greedy little child and I want some more. fhysho.
Oh, sadistic. Oh lovely, oh so lovely.
Perfection.
I await with greedy eyes the coming of your next chapter.
(: |
Mystyre 2008-02-19 . chapter 18I don't know whether to be ecstatic about your update or furious because of the cliffhanger!! We'll start with ecstatic.
As you know, I am totally in love with these stories, and updates to them automatically make it a good day. I think you did an excellent job with this chapter; it was very climatic and edge-of-the-seat reading.
As for being furious, I guess it's more of frustration; again, only because you're writing such a fast-paced story and I want to know what happens next! I couldn't believe what Raven did to Robin, when she tricked him into thinking she was back to normal. I was getting fuzzy feelings because things were going to get better, and then there was an oh ** moment because that wasn't at all what was happening. Grr.
And now they're in Hell? And Robin's practically dead? Again? Jeez! I hope the next chapter's coming soon! |
the kid from colorado 2008-02-19 . chapter 18Oh no! Robin AND Cyborg? How could you? Oh my goodness... |
psycicflower 2008-02-19 . chapter 18Today is a good day. I come home to an amazon order I wasn't expecting for a day or two and this story is updated. Definately makes up for the morning I had.
Wow you really like to kick them when they're down. You killed Cyborg?! He isn't really dead is he? I mean he's half robot, maybe he can be fixed (or so I'll keep telling myself in disbelief)I like it when somethings are left up to the reader and there was a great mix fo emotions. 'Oh good ... I was getting lonely without you...' broke my heart.
Can't wait for the next chapter to see what's going on
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