Reviews for A Second Chance

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Perspicacity 2008-06-18 ch 1,	abuseA "possibly" interesting "story" that "suffers" from an "unfortunate" overuse of "quotation" marks. I do "hope" that you "remedy" this because it proves very "distracting" for those who "wish" to read your "story."
Ranger Dragen 2008-04-29 ch 5,	abuseAnother great chapter mate, I love how the story is going and I can't wait to read more. I like the staff meeting, where they learned what Harry did. Is there going to be any Harry/Rose in the story?? I like what happened when the Dementors showed up.
Ranger Dragen 2008-04-29 ch 1,	abuseOh great start mate, I like who Hedwig used to belonged to. I do like the letter from Albus to Harry. Poor Harry, losing people that he loves and cares for. So Tom is sending Harry back, so he can control Harry, oh the fool.
dennisud 2008-04-11 ch 5,	abuseFirst I really like this one. The plotline is a great Though at times the details doies slow the reading in places. The ACC Rose sure makes me think as your developing this. Plus the added chances Harry has with Ginny & Hermione is only an added bonus. The magical link sure seems to be bringing them closer but just remember they are all 11 to 12 so far,even with the 18 years of memories Harry & Rose share keep it clean please. dennisud
SFD 2008-03-28 ch 2,	abuseI enjoyed this one, but got a bit lost in the sequel. Maybe it was my concentration, so I promise to come back one day soon. Probably by the time that you will post a new chapter. Thanks! Niv
Vilkath 2008-01-08 ch 2,	abuseInteresting first chapter, second and up gets a little confusing. I kind of feel the AU world he lands in is a little to complex with way to many new characters for how suddenly Harry is dropped into it. I really found Harry's reactions to Dumbledoor a little more mild then I would have liked though. I mean come on he not only set him up with a legaly binding marriage, but used magic to influnce their feelings for eachother and further used more magic to confuse Hermonie's feelings for him! Which makes no sense, I can understand the Grangers against an arranged marriage, but where did superman make the jump from that to magicaly forcing Hermonie to not love Harry? If the old man was already considering a multi girl marriage with Harry what was the problem? Over all I really got say if you compile those actions of a magicaly forced relationship with all the other wrongs Dumbledoor did in his life, I would of expected more resentment. Over all I some how just could not read this story past the second chapter. First one was a little depressing, then the second through a ton of changes and Oc's into the readers face. Over all giving me the impression this story would done better with less details, or more build up to explain it all.
Taeniaea 2007-12-07 ch 5,	abuseGreat Story!!
Untamed of Wildwind 2007-11-08 ch 5,	abuseFunny story. Keep up the good work!
bluezy261175 2007-11-05 ch 5,	abuseWell, I stumbled across this story, and, although I usually don't bother with short stories. (Not a slight to your writing talents or something just that I love reading long convuluted tales.) The fact that it had several sequals made it interesting to me. I love your style and am of to read the rest.
BloodySeraphim 2007-10-29 ch 1,	abuseThat was one hell of a prologue. Fascinating way to introduce time travel.
B Slick 2007-10-14 ch 5, anon.	abuseGreat story, but isn't there only one L in Lily Potter?
Kat501 2007-09-30 ch 2,	abusegood chapter. Kat.
FMP 2007-08-29 ch 5,	abusebloody brilliant, couldn't stop reading once i started, and am very glad that theres more :)
Sandsterthefourth 2007-08-08 ch 1,	abuseI'm sure everyone would be as understanding as your Harry when they discovered how someone was controlling their life, who they loved, feelings, etc. ... yeah
PhoenixMagic 2007-07-08 ch 5,	abusewow great story!! I love it!! I can't wait to read the next part to this story

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