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2009-11-26 . chapter 51
very nice
Polish
2009-11-15 . chapter 8
IMMA KILL THAT FOO!-meaning Im going to KILL Vernun Dursley!- Kachink! -sound of gun being cocked, loaded, and readied- This is good, also, yknow I often find myself thinking, what happened to Hedwig during all this? did he let her go? or did someone come for her? yeah I know trivial but ya got to wonder. ^^
Polish
2009-11-15 . chapter 5
Yeah, I noticed that too, I really dont think that Harry or even any of the other children in the book have had "The Talk" I really dont, all they every really talk about is snogging, or kissing, thats about it. I mean, I know its about the author trying to keep it kid worthy, but by the time you get to the 4th book, those books really stop being for kids and start being for teens. This is really well done! ^^ Congrats!
Polish
2009-11-15 . chapter 4
I TOLD YOU HE WAS A PEDAFILE! -sorry for shouting-
lol, poor Harry, or is it? ><
Polish
2009-11-15 . chapter 3
-Reads letter- 0.o;; PEDAFILE!-points finger accusingly at Voldemort- Dude, your like pushing 100! -shudders-

This is good, I shall now go back to reading! ^^
HarrisonxPotterxox
2009-11-15 . chapter 3
Your stories are really bad. I'm not trying to be mean or anything (although I'm sure this will come off as such and to be honest I don't really care) but your descriptions are either all over the place or nonexistent. Your words are far too simple with no broad vocabulary stretches present at any point, you make the characters Ooc and in many cases you misspell words from the Harry Potter books or make random stuff up such as 'Salamir'. Were you TRYING to spell 'Salazar'? Plus, there is no Salamir inheritance line from Salazar Slytherin. Not at all and you never stated you were going to make this particular story non-correspondent to the Canon series.

I'm sorry but ALL your stories are like this. I've gone through five chapters each time - with the exception of this one - and I have to say that you lack talent.

Please do not respond to this. I'm not afraid of you '** me out' over this, but I simply can't be bothered responding to a lost cause. Goodbye and good luck (although I fear you'll be needing more than that).
dragonbaby93
2009-11-04 . chapter 51
This story was really great. I almost didn't read it because I thought it would be another ending where Voldemort didn't turly love him just felt possessive, and Harry ends up with someone else happy to finally be free of him. Great as those stories can be, I'd just read about 3 in a row and really couldn't stand another right then. After reading your reviews I decided to give it a shot and I'm glad I did. The plot was great, I loved the relationships, and I really appreciated that those who knew the truth were accepting of Harry.
Hope to read more from you in the future.
Bobette13
2009-10-20 . chapter 51
that was really good!
the reason i read this was due to its reviews, which were all positive and one that commented on how they were suprised at how few reviews it had- which i echo.

too tired to rite a decent review, but i really liked your characters, and harry and voldemorts powers were cool yet logical.
Bobette13
2009-10-19 . chapter 4
lol sorry, you have this whole dark tone going and then you say "the dark lord wanted to sex him."
...i would read this as find out what sex he is, as in you sex an animal, like a dog or cat.
..or snakes. 2 (slightly odd) ways to do that, but anyways...

what you most definetely meant was "the dark lord wanted to have sex with him," or something along that line.
Aelirenn
2009-10-14 . chapter 51
Amazingly good. I see why I kept seeing this story recommended by other authors. Off to start on the sequel now!
Moenia
2009-09-26 . chapter 51
I managed to read it! ;) Really loved it, now I'm moving on with Weapon!
Basil to Blithe
2009-09-08 . chapter 51
D'aw.
Miss C Riddle
2009-08-18 . chapter 46
Or at least Draco thinks he knows the truth
Fate
2009-08-14 . chapter 51
Brilliant Story! And I can't believe you don't have more reviews for it...

Um... one thing though, I remember reading this before it was edited and I couldn't find the link to the full version on your bio...

I'm going to go read the sequel now. :D
HopeCullen
2009-08-05 . chapter 51
I love it it has a good plot line
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