aaww this was waffy and nice. i was a bit surprised to find that kenshin and kaoru was already 'together' on this one. it was a good surprise.

write more :)

Lovely characterization of Kaoru. Wonderful job, and I look forward to anything else you come out with.

Very sweet. Goal accomplished, few words, yet I could picture the whole scene vividly.

I loved it! Very sweet and cute

A set of vignettes! A set of vignettes!
This one was so cute and sweet!
I want to read more of this, I think you did a great job here, and you managed to reflect Kenshin's calm behavior.
I loved it!

Sweet. You've captured a day in the dojo very nicely.

Very sweet.

This: "He loves her contradictions: he loves the fierce look in her eyes and the shy smile on her lips, the calluses on her hands and the smoothness of her skin; how her lonely expression compelled him to walk out to her in the rain, and now her words try to disguise her emotions."

I really, really liked that...

I really like this one. You capture the emotions well, but you also paint very nice pictures with your words. If you wish to leave this as a stand alone, that is of course your choice. But if you do choose to continue, I will read.

Lovely, quiet, and moving. Thank you, and let me encourage you to continue this, either in vignettes, or with other stories.

Sweet and touching. Very good characteriztion, I like it ^^