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Reviews For: When Time Stands Still

DE-LISH-CIOUS
2007-08-05
ch 1,
abuseAh, "..but you are different, and...I like it..."
Good one here! Although it was quite long, you rly held my attention there, and so far, i do have quite a short attention span!
You've only written two stories thus far? Do write somemore! (:
nadia65
2007-03-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseAh yes.that was very pleasing.i really liked it.
But what do you mean when you said "back over lightyears and returned to the days events,to hope and love"?I feel like i know what your talking about but i don't know what you mean.
Here fishy fishy
2006-10-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseooh well writen
Bronze Angel
2006-07-31
ch 1,
abuseThis was such a beautiful story...It must have took alot of time to think it up. 'Wow' was all I could say. I look forward to your future works. Good Job!!
o-dragon
2006-04-25
ch 1,
abuseWow. I can't believe you only got 9 reviews for this. It's too good to just skip over and ignore the review! It was TOO GOOD. You should be really happy that this was your first fic and it was still so good. Most people's first fics on here turn out to be total wastes (including mine), but this wasn't by a long shot. Although I did see some spelling and tense errors (where you change what tense you're writing in), It was still awesome. My first GaaraxSakura fic, and you've got me hooked. It was amazing, and I liked how you included what Shukaku was doing during that time. This is so going on my faves list. My last thought: This was awesome, I can't put into words how great it was without having to re-write it entirely, but know that I loved it tons, and I'll tell my friends to read it. Also, It's strange. My friend and I were just talking about GaaraxSakura today and how I couldn't see it happening. I got home, read this, and I think I'll have to eat my words tomorrow when I see her.
Keep writing,
~Olivia
TheEndlessSnow
2006-03-10
ch 1,
abusewhy are you sorry that its long long is good and this story was good...no wait it was better than good it was amazing.
Sandstorm626
2006-01-18
ch 1,
abuseOMG! you rock.
i love gaara, and sakura is my fav girl charrie from naruto, so FINALLY reading a fic with them is it was awesome.
*great job*
til next time...♪
SakuBloss
2005-12-23
ch 1,
abuseWow! This story was great! I was really impressed with your writing. And I really think that you should continue it ^_^

P.S. Thanks for reviewing my story, and I added you to my C2 "Gaara and Sakura Love" ^_^
o-aki-hoshi
2005-12-21
ch 1,
abuseWow I love it... I think that you could pull off continuing this masterpiece... but if you decide that you dont want to I will live with that... ^^ yay I LOVE IT!
JadeOokami
2005-11-30
ch 1,
abusewow. i dont readnaruto fanfiction much, though i do love the books and show. Gaara is my favorite character, and Sakura's cool. And i marvel at how you created a sentimental moment, yet kept even Gaara of the sand, in character. It was not at all OOC, and I really liked it! Keep it up! Laterz
Luna Forest
2005-11-30
ch 1,
abusewow...very kool... kodos 4 everything... i dont think that i really have anything bad to say...wow
aisarikka
2005-11-29
ch 1,
abusei praise your work for it is magnificent.
i praise you for your skills and ability to toy with words and stir the heart!
this is a wonderful fic!
CloeyMarie
2005-11-28
ch 1,
abuseIf I had know how few reviews you've had for this I would have reviewed right after I finished reading, sadly school was calling and so was my mother, hehe note to self do not anger mom in the morning /sweatdrops anime style/.

Well back to your wonderful writing let me just say I was in awe of how well written this story is not to mention how well you wrote all of the charectors. Everyone stayed in charector and you wove everything together so perfectly it was truly a joy to read this fine fan fiction. It was so cute when they're hugging and Gaara's all confused and Sakura is making sure that she doesn't anger him and...I could go on all day, it was just that good.

Anyway I really hope that you continue this fic because I really think that it could have many more chapters and be anything but tiresome. This is a great piece of work and I sinceraly hope that you continue it, I will be your personal cheerleader! Yes it shall be my new job, so please continue, I'll be waiting! -Cloey Marie-
Liliana Moon
2005-09-23
ch 1,
abuseOH that was really good!! Thank you for reading my story!! On your question about if the boy , it is gaara but about is he taking the place of george, You'll find out one day Muhahahahahahaha...um..yea... Great fic tho!
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