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Reviews for: Drowning on Air
Hahukum Konn
2006-02-05 . chapter 1
Wow. :) Nice twist there - it seems you've decided that Harry's had time and space to deal with his feelings about Snape's killing of Dumbledore. He's become a general, a soldier, aware of strategy and tactics. And this move is the move not of a boy who wants friends, but a general who wants an ally. :)

Nice touch. :)
Miss Fanatical
2005-12-09 . chapter 1
love the twist at the end XD !
Slightly Sinister Sinestra
2005-11-25 . chapter 1
Oh, excellent! This is so much better done than others I've read with the same theme. Please, continue.
Silver Chemist
2005-10-09 . chapter 1
Well written. That sounds very realistic. I also loved the wonderful twist at end. It does have a great deal of thought behind it. I liked how you linked DADA position issue and how you added some little details. This idea can devlop into a great storyline.

Keep writing.

~Hope^_^
Loop-da-loopy
2005-09-25 . chapter 1
I really liked this story and would love to read more. You realy should write some more chapters. Well done on a great fan fic!
excessivelyperky
2005-09-24 . chapter 1
Nice! I would really like to see more to this story. That's a good point about the curse on the DADA position.
kidarock
2005-09-24 . chapter 1
Great story! Are you going to continue? I want to see Snapes reation when he see's Harry!
cecelle
2005-09-23 . chapter 1
Nice twist at the end. If only!!
tam
2005-09-23 . chapter 1
wow, nice twist @ the end!
Perriwinklebluetwinkle
2005-09-23 . chapter 1
Ooh interesting, write more soon X
Golumfryingeggs
2005-09-22 . chapter 1
This is very good! I enjoyed it till the end and I hope you write more like these! Very touching and also to a sense very funny, kinda a PoA thing you got going there. With the invisibility cloak and all!

Very cool and very nicely wirtten!

And yet heart shattering. I can't undersand it, my feeling to the end was that of sorrow, when Harry told him they needed him. Can't understand it. Well any way excelent in every way! Write more like these!

But I have a vaction to get to, your probaby tired of reading this review and my fingers are getting numb so,

Have a Magical Hogwarts day!

Yours insanely

Golumfryingeggs.
carpathia
2005-09-22 . chapter 1
oh, good start,you have peaked my interest. Well done, update soon.
sicca
2005-09-22 . chapter 1
hey hellow! when i have finished to read the book, i was so revolted because of the end (although that´s very very good). like snape was treated like eum... well a traitor... so i´ve search many fics that would ¨ease¨ my revoltation and well i found this and it´s well exactly what i was looking for. it´s very but very very good!! thx now i can relax in peace lol.
serebii
2005-09-22 . chapter 1
please don't make this a oneshot. This could be an interesting storyline , please go with it!
Mystical Witch
2005-09-22 . chapter 1
Now that's a begiining of a different sort. An surprise kick of an ending.
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