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special agent kibbs
2007-08-08
ch 1,
abuseomg that fic was so beautifly written, i know people in like their 30'ies who have written moving stories like that and are no where near as good as that.i have tears streaming down my eyes from that poem. i cant believe your ownly 14

i can still remeber that day slearly, even though i live in the U.K i shocked everyone i knew, i was in year three and about to have maths when the head teacher called an emergancy assembly to tell us of the tradgedy. and showed us the towers falling on the big projector.

ok spookie thing im watching csi ny now and mac was talking about the deffinition of unjustice of when claire died
Missy Holland
2006-08-25
ch 1,
abuseI watched the news when it happened, you story reminded me again of the terror, but also of the ones that I love most, and how much I care about them. Thank you.
Loves,
Coda
2006-08-10
ch 1, anon.
abusea beautiful story. The poem nearly made me cry. I watched the news today and 9/11 nearly happened to us. Some terrorists came on 9 planes and tried to blow them all up. We're just lucky that didnt happen I guess.

In the memory of all the brave souls that lost their lives.

xCodax
Dark Angel's Blue Fire
2006-06-14
ch 1,
abuseWow that was amazing it definately sent a shiver up my spine welldone you did a really amazing job!
Lora-Lai
2006-05-29
ch 1,
abuseYou have to stop writing so well! This fic almost made me cry...
Scifi-warper
2006-04-24
ch 1,
abuseA moving, and spell-binding one-shot. I could literally feel the shock and horror of 9/11 all over again and amplified by the characters. Great FIC!
SiniseLuvr
2006-03-05
ch 1,
abuseThis was beautiful... thank you...
Orlenda
2006-01-09
ch 1,
abuseI really liked this-made me cry. I'm going through a tough time right now, and it put a few things in perspective. Thanks and I think it was a fitting tribute! one of the best song pairings i have seen.
4UCSI
2005-11-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseif i ever read something more beautifull you'll be the first one to know !!
I don't now how but somehow you've managed to write something that made me shiver! And believe me , that never happend before 'cause in ain't an easy thing to do! Have you wrote more fanfics?? I'd like to read them!
But i've got something to ask you.(i'm not english so forgive how i spell all this) How do you ad your fanfiction at the site and tv-show?? I'd like to ad some off my one but i don't know how, so could you help me out here? ( our someone else how's reading this) Thanks already for writing this fanfic and i hope you answer me ( even thouh(g) i'm a total stranger):P

greetsz 4UCSI

to all my friens in Holland i'd like to say: hi isz t geen keileuke fanfic:P as k wa shrijf en toevoeg isz het voor jullie Nederlanders:P Als jullie weten hoe k moet toevoegnemag t ook in het Nederlands!
Dark Romanticism
2005-11-03
ch 1,
abuseChrist. This is really good. It makes me think back to that hellish day and my reactions to it. I live in Kentucky so I didn't really know anyone that worked in the Towers or firemen and police officers that died in the wreckage but it still gives my heart a painful stab everytime I think of it. This did make me cry...maybe I'm just a big crybaby...Great job...Definetly going on my favorites list.
Secret4eyes
2005-09-25
ch 1,
abuseWow. I like this story. It's hard to believe you're thirteen, the story's very mature and well written. Keep up the good work!
forensic-chick
2005-09-24
ch 1,
abuseWow. That was awesome. Told ya you should post it! Very moving, sad and dramatic... just the way I like it!!
stardustshadows
2005-09-23
ch 1,
abuseThis is a really good story...I think, though, that you should give credit to the artist of the song (Alan Jackson, right?). It's kinda like an unspoken rule in the fanfic world. But other than that...very bittersweet. More lemons than sugar...perfect. =D Keep it up!
Lu78
2005-09-23
ch 1,
abuseWOW! that was a great and powerful story you wrote. Great to see evryone's personal account of what had happened on that terrible day.
Igiveup
2005-09-23
ch 1,
abuseThat was a beautiful story, thank you for sharing.
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