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| Mia 2006-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked it, alot. This is my feeling too when I touch ice, and this analogy is perfect for Wesly and Lilah. |
| Wild Iris 2005-12-11 ch 1,  | abuseExcellent drabble. Very sensous, and I like the understated finality of the ending. One little quibble re. this line: 'The ever-lasting burn always remains' - if it's ever-lasting it would, by definition, always remain, so the adjective seems superfluous there. |
| wesleyssilverphoenix 2005-09-24 ch 1, | abuseWow. |
| Evilawyer 2005-09-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery interesting analogy. Nice execution. |
| forced feelings 2005-09-23 ch 1, | abuseI feel that way when I touch ice (or snow) for long periods of time, too! But, ahem. Anyway. Lovely drabble. Absolutely lovely. You've really captured the essence of their drabble. Amazing job. |
| smiling 2005-09-22 ch 1, | abuseSee. You take an everyday thing, like ice, and make it interesting. Very good! |