WOW! Chapter 4 is really well written. I got choked up at the end with feelings of despair. (Poor Anakin) This chapter it's a short piece, but it didn't make a difference to me.(I actually thought it was longer when I ) Please continue writing. It would be terrible if you stopped.

that was amazing it works as a one shot but would be good as moe too!

I really like what you've started, especially the different perspectives of events that occurred in AOTC. Please say you will continue.

- Rachel

I loved this fic. It is absolutely beautiful.

very intense and deep.

I liked it

please write more

aww this is such a sweet story! _

Nice! I like it!

wow... intense.

It's really interesting, I hope to read more soon.