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AnFan-n-More
2009-09-23 . chapter 5
You've done a wonderful job of telling this story. I hope you continue it. I'm very glad that you've avoided retelling the plot of Harry Potter, and have made this an original work that traces itself around that one.

I'm hoping that you are able to modify the original tale in such a way that will take into account the interactions of the "foreign" influences.

So far you haven't gotten into the meat of the story yet. The only part that seems to be a buildup of tension (though humorous) was the prank war. Everything else seems to be a descriptive tie-in of the background stories.

Again, I've enjoyed reading these first 5 chapters, and look forward to what you have planed for the rest of the story. :)
deathgeonous
2009-07-15 . chapter 1
Let me just say this, I miss this. Really, I hate the Harry Potter Cannon, and I dislike a lot of the fan fics, but some are just too great to ignore, and this is one of them, so, thanks for writing this, please update it some time in the future, bye for now.
Shanami
2009-05-22 . chapter 5
This is definitely the most interesting Ranma/HP cross I've ever read. I can't wait to see more of it.
elrail
2009-05-03 . chapter 2
sorry to say but Happi and Khu Lon are both past their 3oth decade
but other wise great story
The Wandering Soul of 1014
2009-04-19 . chapter 5
-I've taken an interest in this story, and would love to see it continued. Problem is, it hasn't been touched in a couple of months, and you don't seem to have a good track record of finishing stories. I really would like to see more of this from you, as you are one of the few artists who have been able to paint a passable (more than, in this case) blend of magic and martial arts.

However, if something isn't done soon, I may end up doing something drastic, as to leave a story such as this in the dust would be a great tragedy. Please, do your best to finish this story; you haven't even gotten to the Nabiki/Ranma relationship yet (probably to occur in the third year, unless Nabiki and Akane have been going through heavy tutoring).

Please let me know that you are still writing this; I would gladly assist in any way possible if you need it.

Happy writing, and as a true fan of both Harry Potter and Ranma 1/2, I beg you to update soon!
Will Rayne
2009-04-16 . chapter 1
I feel massive kung fu snake fighting coming up at some point or another and it will be glorious. Will Ranko ever tell anyone that she is really a boy or not?
keichan2
2009-04-15 . chapter 5
Argh!
I was certain that this was the story where Nodoka was a certain (ex) flat chested redhead from the Slayers universe, and so it did not get to the top of my "to read" list.
But obviously, it is not!

I really hope you will be able to update soon, because I LOVE Ranma-Nabiki stories, and we have yet to see them together...

(Oh! And I was certain that in chapter 3, Mitzi had changed Ranko's letter to her mother into a howler, but the lack of news about that let me wondering why she was "trying to stifle a grin" and then "stifling a giggle"...)
DCWestby
2009-04-07 . chapter 5
Entertaining... Update soon.
Cattsith
2009-01-24 . chapter 5
I, too, am glad this story isn't dead. Hooray for updates! Thanks! Keep it coming, K?
The Wandering Soul of 1014
2009-01-22 . chapter 1
-Just recently found this story, and I have to say, it's very interesting. I wouldn't mind seeing it become something of a running series, though I hope you don't mind me pushing for a Nabiki/Ranma pairing . . . though at this point, it is definitely too early for that! I wouldn't mind seeing her pop up in the next year (or maybe earlier, depending on whether or not she and Akane have someone tutoring them).

Happy writing, and update soon!
chm01
2009-01-21 . chapter 5
but isn't ranma the heir of slytherin?
Shinigami-chan
2009-01-09 . chapter 5
awesome story! you need to update, becausei have to know what happens!
KitsuneOverlord
2009-01-08 . chapter 5
Wonderful! An update! I was actually sure that Hikari no Daija had been abandoned... Good to see that I was wrong!

So, the Basilisk is on the prowl... I wonder how that is going to end? Personally, I hope the creature lives. The thing is baddass, and the way it got offed was pretty pathetic.

Keep up the good work!
eoneed
2009-01-05 . chapter 5
I'm glad that one of my favorite stories is not dead:) Update soon.
Jemtlen
2009-01-05 . chapter 5
Woohoo an update. Please make the next one faster... Like your stories hate the waiting.
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