 ZedPM 2009-02-16 . chapter 1I love it! Beautifully written, I love how you portray Remus's thoughts/feeling etc and the wolf's, and how you had James, Sirius and Remus react to finding out.
-Kimly |
 E. M. Pink 2005-10-04 . chapter 1Where have you BEEN? I thought there weren't any good newish or unknown authors left on kidding. There are - it's just that they don't get enough notice or something, like you.
That was really great, if in a tad dramatic and old-for-his-years kind of way. I can totally emphathise - most of my characters seem to worm their way into talking like that.
It's crimminal you haven't gotten any more reviews - try joining a group or something related to the Marauders and so on, and announcing your fics a couple times. That's what I did, before I'd even posted the thing up. Natter back at me in my livejournal if you like, and we can both moan and carry on about selfish readers that don't review enough ;).
Oh, and yeah - this is definitely going in my C2. |
 MoriaRavenswood 2005-10-03 . chapter 1 I'm surprised this hasn't been reviewed yet; it's quite good. It managed to be really sweet and still seem believable-- I loved the line about not asking them to forgive "crying like a girl." It also seemed like James and Sirius were two separate characters, which can be difficult to find.
"I've got cousins with worse times of month than you." :) Oh dear... now I want to go and write about PMS-ing Black Sisters.
You got gave a good sense of Remus' reactions... the reader knows they're going to be okay with it, but you still feel his disappointment and fear when they find out. |